Love Sick 1/1

[calie15]

Title: Love Sick 1/1
Rating: R
Summary: Between Charade and Sacrifice. Oliver returns from his business trip and Chloe, fearing that things are becoming complicated, attempts to redraw the lines.
Notes: I'm not to happy with this. I thought I was, but I'm not. But anyway. The fiction output has been running a little slow. I think my concern about next

Comments

[sxymami0909]

This was so beautifully written. I love stories that a written to fit into the season, but show you the mission pieces that they leave in off screenville LoL Thanks so much for sharing this. i really did enjoy it! :-D

[calie15]

I agree...when people write the missing pieces it kind of gives us a better outlook. I love it! Thanks for the review!

[pompeypearly_v2]

that was so nice. i love intimate little stories like this. I think the complicated pasts of the characters really sells stories like this, you can imagine something like this would happen with them.

[calie15]

Thanks! This one did seem kind of real to me. I was trying my based to draw on what happened in Charade and what was going to happen in Sacrifice for this fic.

[xfilefan79]

Loved it, I would have loved to see more of their development onscreen, but this is definitely how I could see it happening. I'm so glad you wrote something new, you seem to understand and write them both so well your characterisation as always is spot on, hope you write more soon.

[calie15]

Wouldn't we all have loved more development on screen.

And thanks for the compliment, about the characterization. I'm glad I can get it right, or at least appear to lol.

[soapfan101]

aw I love this......thanks

[calie15]

Thanks for the review!

[halo_jess]

So wonderfully written! =)

[calie15]

Thanks!