Title: Third Time's a Charm 1/1

[calie15]

TItle: Third Time's a Charm 1/1
Summary: He screwed it up the past two times, this time he had to fix his mistake before it was to late.
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Smut, haha. Thanks to Lucy for the editing.

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Comments

[ladyhawke01]

My goodness that was good. Hot, steamy, and emotional all rolled in to one. If we could get half of that from the SV writers the show would have more fans.

[kc_2009]

My god! This was awsome. Loved the scene outside in the rain, I was imagining it in my head while reading and I got my eyes teary! I could see in my head Ollie's face of desesperation, and Chloe's pain. And then... uufff, HAWT!! and I loved how Ollie was so shocked about Chloe saying that she loved him too.

I want my Chlollie on the show,
But Im so very thankful of this AMAZING fics!! :)

[pennytrees]

Glad I decided to take a second look even though I saw NC-17 along with Lois's name. LOL

Great steamy payoff at the end. As hot as this was though, it was tough to accept Chloe forgiving Ollie so easily after his whorish ways. If this is the way it goes on screen, I want to see him work harder, and her suffer a little less. I don't know why, maybe I'm more of a Chloe than Ollie fan...I just hate to see her getting her heart broken by another hero all over again, even if said hero IS really in love with her and just using douche reasoning.

So yea, but anyway--did I mention again how incredibly hot the payoff is here? Kudos on that. =)

[calie15]

I understand how you feel. The only way I could get my mind around it was the fact that they were only having a sexual relationship and he honestly believed she didn't care about him. That she really only wanted sex with him and was looking for love elsewhere.

But I'm glad you liked it!

[lilisullivan]

Great fic. After all his love deceptions, i knew Chloe would be the one.

[burstoflight]

Seriously hot! <3