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calie15

The Fall 10/?

Aug 22, 2009 15:45

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ship: arthur/gwen, title: the fall, fandom: smallville, fanfic, rating: nc17

Comments 21

richlanrocks August 22 2009, 22:14:41 UTC

It's because he's falling for you Chloe. Poor Chloe. Oliver needs to stop being an idiot. This was an awesome chapter. Loved it.

calie15 August 22 2009, 22:16:45 UTC

He is an idiot. But I think he is finalyl hitting rock bottom.

kc_2009 August 22 2009, 23:07:50 UTC

OMG I love it!!!!! Poor Oliver, he was fighting his feelings but he couldn't do it anymore, he kiss her!!!!!! I'm so excited, and Chloe like it (How in the world couldn't she??) now are both in love!!! sweet.. I'm happy!!

kryptolori August 22 2009, 23:38:53 UTC

OMFG Awesome chapter Calie, well worth the wait! everything I hoped for, this would be amazing on the show and it's exactly where these two are right now. So looking forward to the fall out from the kiss! Great description on the Chloe/Lois scene btw, I could see it play out in my head really clear!

calie15 August 23 2009, 02:27:36 UTC

You know I just really wanted the lois/chloe scene to be absolutely ridicuous. It would have been better if iy wasn't for crabky oliver.

justwriter2 August 23 2009, 00:33:31 UTC

Awesome! This was totally and absolutely awesome! I only wish that he'd stayed longer.

-jw`chan ^-^

calie15 August 23 2009, 02:24:08 UTC

The next chapter should totally pay off.

nightsrayne August 23 2009, 02:20:00 UTC

Ah! *hops up and down clapping* bout time he gave in to his feelings. :) awesome chapter cant wait till the next one. only darn him and him running away :P

calie15 August 23 2009, 02:25:22 UTC

I know...but you know he couldn't have given in on the first try. That would have been to easy.