I think the Chloe/Oliver is moving along just fine. You can't rush it, and you're developing in nicely. Love where the story is going. I'm glad you kept Chlark friends with no friction. It works much better this way. I'm enjoying this very much! :)
What did you think aboout the fanart. Man it took me forever. I don't know how you do it. I mean I guess you get better with practice...but still. And I remember you making all those ones for me when I did Abandoned Hero!
I like it! Arts are not easy to make, especially if you are doing manipulations and trying to make them look as though they are together, when they never were. It does get a lot easier with practice though, and you are doing great!
Mmmm and the plot thickens.....Hey Calie, I agree with Gen, I like the pace of the Chlollie build up, I like to see Ollie falling for her in everyway! I love the art, the background is very cool, very mixed up GA feel about it and I love that pic of Chloe.
Thanks. I'm glad you are loving the story and the art. I was a bit more worried about the art, but you know I feel a bit weird for dragging the story out so much. That isn't my usual norm. But Oliver is in such a bad place it takes a while to get him back to his good old self.
So glad they found Chloe. Of course now there is someone after them. I love relationships that are slow build and not forced down people's throats. So I have to agree with the others and love how you're writing the Chlollie relationship. Awesome banner I absolutely love it. I so wish I could make banners. I wish I could everything really.
Oh I hope you don't mind but I added you to my aim messenger I'm know as TabbyD26
I like the slow building ones also. It makes the relationship worth it. But sometimes I hate the wait.
I don't mind you adding me. I'm on all hours of the night, really. Most of the time until two in the morning. Late at night is the onyl time I have to write.
I think you're doing great with this story. It's completely different from anything else that's out there. I'm wondering if Chloe will need a new identity and if so, during daily life will she have to wear a wig like Dina and some glasses like Clark?
Good chapter. I like that Oliver didn't go on full hero mode yet. It can be easy for him to be back to who he was. And for the same reason, is ok that there's no Chlollie yet. Like an italian quote says: "Piano piano va lontano.." (slow you get away..) I'm wondering if at any point are you going to bring Chloe's issues to the table too?? (you know, Jimmy/Davis deaths, how she feel about it, her loneliness, Clark's abandonment, etc..) If you prefer not, is ok, just wondering. This far very good story :)
You know I'm not sure if I'm going to bring up the whole doomsday thing clark and jimmy included. I mean I think oliver is going to be upset with himself when he realizes he is attracted to her and feel guilty about it. I'm not sure about chloe. I probably need to address it a little bit though. It wouls only seem natural.
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Oh I hope you don't mind but I added you to my aim messenger I'm know as TabbyD26
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I don't mind you adding me. I'm on all hours of the night, really. Most of the time until two in the morning. Late at night is the onyl time I have to write.
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I just got from vacation. I saw your banner and it was totally awesome! I was listening to this song when I saw it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KLv12DFnEXY
I think you're doing great with this story. It's completely different from anything else that's out there. I'm wondering if Chloe will need a new identity and if so, during daily life will she have to wear a wig like Dina and some glasses like Clark?
-jw`chan ^-^
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I'm wondering if at any point are you going to bring Chloe's issues to the table too?? (you know, Jimmy/Davis deaths, how she feel about it, her loneliness, Clark's abandonment, etc..) If you prefer not, is ok, just wondering. This far very good story :)
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