Faustian Hopscotch Chap 1

Feb 22, 2011 09:19

Title:Faustian Hopscotch
Author:Calamityjim
Fandoms:Supernatura/SGA
Rating: Mature 
Warnings: Supernatural-Spoilers to season 5, SG-1, to season 9, and SGA, all seasons. Also Violence, swearing, pairings, sexual content, and aliens
Disclaimer:Stargate belongs to MGM, Supernatural to the CW
Distribution: Crossposted on fanfic.net
Summary: A routine ( Read more... )

supernatural, faustian hopscotch, .fanfic, rebirth verse, stargate atlantis

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hummingbird5589 February 22 2011, 17:04:08 UTC
When John had finally been allowed to leave he had still been busted back to light duty until Beckett saw fit, leaving John to deal with the paperwork that came with turning into a bug. It had taken John a while to find the right sheet; the list of forms involving insect related injuries included but were not limited to being bitten by an insect, being poisoned by an insect, being turned into a cocoon, invasions of mechanical insects, seeing invisible interdimensional insects, and having the base be taken over by invisible insects. John really hoped that some of the sheets had been draw up in case of potential problems instead of in response to actual issues. This was part of the reason he hated doing paperwork. On Earth it was simply boring. Here it scared the shit out of him.
I recognize most if not all of these. Does John really want to know that all of these incidents happened?

"You will all experience simulated combat against Pegasus veterans. While I don't expect you to beat your peers I do expect that you give it your all and ( ... )

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calamityjim February 23 2011, 18:53:55 UTC
1. No, John doesn't. Hence why paperwork freaks him out so badly. He's in denial. O'Neill did not give him enough background info when he made him sign up. XD

2. I think John is more likely to have a panic attack.

3. >:D

Thanks for the review.

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shadwrayvn February 23 2011, 01:59:12 UTC
Oh God Oh God I can picture Dean's oh shit face when the door opened on Sheppard & McKay! This is a great start & can't wait for more!!

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calamityjim February 23 2011, 18:54:47 UTC
I had a total mental image when I wrote this chap. I could hear the door slowly squeaking closed. XD

Thanks for the review!

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darkestnight12 February 23 2011, 06:35:21 UTC
*dies* OMG. That last scene. THAT LAST SCENE!

I cannot express how much I love the description on how much Atlantis adores Dean. Really. I had to reread that paragraph three or five times for me to stop squeeing over it, and I think I'm going to scroll back up and reread it another time.

YES! Continuing this 'verse! THANK YOU SO MUCH~!

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calamityjim February 23 2011, 18:57:22 UTC
This chapter was way shorter than the others and it was because of that last scene. Nothing I could have added would have made this better. I was laughing so hard when I wrote it.

I'm glad. Dean needs all the hugs he can get. XD

You're welcome. I hope to make this verse a very long one. XD

Thanks for the review!

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iamaslashaddict February 23 2011, 08:10:35 UTC
"...All ATA users will also be taught how to fly a Puddle Jumper-"

"Sonuvabitch!"

*giggles*
LMAO!!! Great first chapter, can't wait for more!

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calamityjim February 23 2011, 18:51:09 UTC
I see you found the sequel. XD

Glad you are liking this. Thanks for the review!

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animeartistjo February 23 2011, 14:12:07 UTC
OMG, I adore this! Your characterizations of all the characters are so spot on and everything works so well together and you bring up aspects of living on Atlantis I'd never would have thought of and omg, how the characters are connected and how they've developed relationships and... This may be one of the best crossovers I've ever read. It's reduced me to a babbling idiot because I can't find enough words to describe how much I loved every chapter of this so far.

Be sure I'll be checking your journal everyday for updates. <3

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calamityjim February 23 2011, 18:59:19 UTC
Wow. I'm really flattered. I've put a lot of work into this and I'm glad that it is showing. And you may be babbling but it isn't idiotic at all. XD

Thanks for the review. I tend to update *tentatively* every three weeks if that helps cure your anxiety at all.

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