[Title: Going Home] [?/?] [One-shot]

[cagalli_chan]

Title: Going Home
Pairing(s): ?/? not telling though there is really none; much implied relationships
Genre: Romance/Drama/Angst
Rating: T
Spoilers: post-Gundam SEED Destiny
Summary: Heading back home after a funeral two people discover what they have lost: their loved ones and themselves.
Author's Notes: Takes place way in the future post-Destiny

Comments

[carameltrap]

It's quite good. Rather introspective and vignette.

He says, “You’re not as talkative as I remember.” This line easily gives away that it's Athrun and Luna. I remembered how talkative she had been with him during their time on Minerva.

The story is just sad and very melancholy, a lot wants and needs. You wrote it well and it holds the reader's attention. Keep up.

[januaryseas]

Very nice! :D I like the way it was written.. ^^

[hibiscus8]

good narration. awesome writing. ^^

[ex_sweeneyto598]

Nice, very nice!

I like the fact that you wrote about an unappriciated and forgotten pairing. I actually like this pairing along with Athrun/Cagalli and Athrun/Meyrin. Good work, and nice descriptions.

[stuntsheep]

I like the way it was written, really caught my attention. Keep up the great work!!