Comments | caffienekitty: SPN Fanfic: Eyesight to the Blind (mild R)

caffienekitty

SPN Fanfic: Eyesight to the Blind (mild R)

Mar 13, 2008 11:33

Title: Eyesight to the Blind
Rating: GEN, Mild R (for bad language, drug references and disturbing content)
Characters: Ansem Weems (Webber), Andy, Tracy
Word Count: 2350-ish
Warnings: Contains Andy, therefore many references to drug use. Some disturbing material, spoilers for 2.05
Summary: "He got me backstage at Aerosmith once. It was beautiful, ( Read more... )

spn: season 2, lj-only, spn 2.05, fanfic, supernatural

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caffienekitty March 14 2008, 06:52:35 UTC

Thanks. Webber seemed like he'd be a little strange in the brain in the episode, so I'm glad that came across.

ravenrants March 13 2008, 19:27:35 UTC

LOLZ "abnormal moshing" There's a normal kind? Hee.
I like it - "Webber" was creepy as all get out, focused and obsessive.

caffienekitty March 14 2008, 06:53:42 UTC

Well, abnormal as in moshing to a ballad by Aerosmith :-)

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caffienekitty March 14 2008, 06:55:15 UTC

Wow, thank you! It's outside of my comfort zone by a bit, so I'm glad it turned out okay.

charis_kalos March 14 2008, 01:20:59 UTC

That was fabulous. I really liked what we saw of Andy (and was sad when he died) and I think you've got him right:

"Ever think about what you could do with something like that? Power like that?" Webber said, advancing toward Andy intently. "You could rule the world, man."

Andy took a step back, retreating from Webber's advance, bumping into the back of the big roadie who'd returned again. "But I don't want-"

And: "Oh god, are you okay? Oh wow. Please don't have amnesia. I never- I swear I-" His hands twisted together, wringing his sleeve cuffs.

Very well written Andy.

And very creepy Webber. I bet he was getting a real kick out of calling Andy 'bro', too.

caffienekitty March 14 2008, 06:57:16 UTC

Thank you! I really liked Andy in the show, so I'm glad he turned out okay. Webber seemed to use 'bro' a lot in the episode, but yeah, I bet he does get a thrill out of calling Andy that.

starrylizard March 14 2008, 03:08:14 UTC

Yay, you posted! Is still think this is awesome!
I love that your reason for the EMF reader being there is a "normal" one and Weems is so freakin' creepy! :)

caffienekitty March 14 2008, 06:59:35 UTC

I was trying to find any reason at all for the two of them to be in the same room as an EMF meter. They do have non-paranormal uses, I'm sure, but the first umpty-jillion Google hits were about ghost-hunting. :-P Thanks again for the last-minute beta!