SPN Fanfic: Just a Well-Informed Anxiety

Mar 15, 2010 01:09

Title: Just A Well-Informed Anxiety
Characters: Sam, Dean (Season 1, shortly after "Bloody Mary")
Rating/Warnings: GEN, PG. Wildly inaccurate hospital procedures and pain management dynamics.
Beta: The scintillating ciaranbochna!
Word Count: 2400-ish
Disclaimer: Not mine, no ownership claimed.
Summary: In situations where a phone call is impossible, text ( Read more... )

charity auctions, "texting with the winchesters", fanfic, supernatural

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ficwriter1966 March 15 2010, 13:43:52 UTC
Cool! I like that whole "you need to be quiet" concept. (As someone who was brought up in a quiet household, and stills enjoys tranquility, I sympathize with the noise-hating ghost!)

The whole cellphone thing, too - I remember when I was in the hospital, EVERY piece of paper had on it "No cellphones." Yet every TV show or movie I see has people talking on cellphones in the hospital.

It's nice to see classic Season 1 stuff, so thanks for this!

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caffienekitty March 15 2010, 15:15:25 UTC
I remember when I was in the hospital, EVERY piece of paper had on it "No cellphones." Yet every TV show or movie I see has people talking on cellphones in the hospital.

I know! I keep mine off anytime I'm within ten feet of a hospital out of habit, but I don't think the newer ones interfere with equipment the way the old massive brick phones used to.

It's nice to see classic Season 1 stuff, so thanks for this!

I've got quite a few long-suffering season 1 bunnies bouncing around the corral. I hope to get to them all eventually. :-)

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embroiderama March 15 2010, 15:44:42 UTC
I love Sam's foggy panic here and the different tones of their text messages. The noise-hating murderous tyrant of a ghost is a great concept, too.

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caffienekitty March 16 2010, 05:20:59 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it worked out okay.

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caffienekitty March 16 2010, 05:34:26 UTC
Would it be wrong to say that I completely sympathize with that ghost? :D

Hee! I can see that. :-)

Sam's tension made me jumpy though :)

Cool! That means it worked. :-) *hands you a cup of... um... chamomile?*

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irismay42 March 15 2010, 18:19:09 UTC
I thought it was just a British thing that cellphones weren't allowed in hospitals - because the STAFF seem to carry them in all the American hospital shows! Heh heh. Glad you've set me straight!

That was fabulous! You could really feel Sam's sense of panic growing, and Dean, probably completely oblivious to all of it!

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caffienekitty March 16 2010, 05:40:58 UTC
North American TV shows are rarely an accurate reflection of reality, which is probably a good thing! XD

You could really feel Sam's sense of panic growing, and Dean, probably completely oblivious to all of it!

Yay! I'm glad it worked!

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tigriswolf March 15 2010, 19:42:23 UTC
I love Sam's stream-of-conciousness here. Poor guy.

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caffienekitty March 16 2010, 05:42:33 UTC
Thanks! I was kinda mean to Sam, I guess. :-)

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