As the Day Grows Darker

Feb 09, 2008 22:53

We are trapped in a dead city, a ghost of its former self, laying in ruin compared to its earlier vibrance. It is weak now, white and pale and sickly, a shell of what had been, gasping for air as it continues to struggle for life ( Read more... )

philosophizing, overdramatic metaphoring, coffee, weariness

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stranglingrose February 10 2008, 06:05:15 UTC
Milk is opaque. It clouds things. You're not making any sense.

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cafedeinfierno February 10 2008, 06:09:58 UTC
You could at least attempt to think outside the box. It only takes a single drop of milk to destroy the pure black magic in a cup of coffee. You understand?

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stranglingrose February 10 2008, 06:11:04 UTC
So destruction is illumination.

...Makes sense.

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cafedeinfierno February 10 2008, 06:12:17 UTC
No, no, no! You don't get it at all!

I mean that the entire consistency changes! Bitterness, acidity, even a bit of the liquidity-- all thrown off by one drop!

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hawkeye_shooter February 10 2008, 07:36:58 UTC
Do you really have to be so over-dramatic?

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cafedeinfierno February 10 2008, 07:38:24 UTC
I've already said it before. Only the stupid are unable to give flourish and beauty to their banal words.

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hawkeye_shooter February 10 2008, 07:41:07 UTC
I didn't say anything about adding "flourish and beauty" to your words...I said do you have to be so over-dramatic.

There's a difference.

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waywardseahorse February 10 2008, 07:43:30 UTC
"Beauty" and "flourish" are used to obsfucate the truth by those who are of too frail a composition to handle such a powerful tool.

I suggest you start being the man's man you so like to pontificate upon, and do yourself the favor of a true confrontation.

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inthephonebook February 10 2008, 18:36:05 UTC
You might as well put the milk in and give it a taste. Stalling usually doesn't improve the flavor much. After all, if it did, we'd have to switch to wine metaphors, and my salary is way too low for me to have a lot of those.

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proxn_punkd February 10 2008, 19:24:58 UTC
They've heard of our plight, I'm sure.

They just don't care.

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cafedeinfierno February 11 2008, 04:46:38 UTC
Hey now! You couldn't even compare my linguistic brilliance to one of the Romantics?

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