Crimson and Clover, Ch. 1

[cafe_blu_fics]

Title: Crimson and Clover
Author: infinitesimi
Genre: Plot/gen
Summary: Ed would do anything to save his brother. Anything, even the impossible.
Note: Manga based with nearly no spoilers, unless you don't know about GreedLing. No pairings. Featuring crazy!Ed, or maybe he isn't crazy?

Comments

[inane_nana]

Very nice. You seem to be blending anime and manga facts (which I didn't like at first, but I'm sure you can make it work) while still keeping the protagonists in character. I like the idea of Al being strong-headed enough to go find a solution on his own but both of them realizing they just need each other to keep going (and of Ed being believably sexual :d). Plus I'm a sucker for gen and, more importantly, PLOT. I sure hope you keep updating, since I really enjoy your fics and hope you'll update soon. ^^

PS: I also follow the Friends and Lovers arcs, but am too much of a stalker to say anything... I find the stories really fascinating.

[infinitesimi]

i think, as a teenager, Ed is definitely sexual, its just not a priority in his life. I guess I do blend some anime and manga facts here, but I was kinda trying not to, oops!

this fic is only five parts, so you'll see the end of it before the other one!

[evil_kat]

hey, I really like this! It looks like it's shaping up to be a really good gen fic! You've got good pacing, and good characterization

[infinitesimi]

thanks! i read pairing fics all the time (dont we all) but my first love was always gen. I'd like to do a genfic I actually finish.

[all_who_i_am]

Loved the story very much, waiting for the next chapter :D

[infinitesimi]

thanks!

[hotomi]

I´m really liking it. (I really didn´t enjoyed much the brief change between the parts where Ed and Al are happy and then Roy is informed that Edward is in coma... but I still liked it) Keep going.

[infinitesimi]

haha, sorry about that, but thanks!

[ceirwy]

Oh yay! You fianlly posted it! Awesome! I got to say this is winding up another fantastic story. Though I kinda have to say that last part/scene with Roy was kinda abrupt. But other than that Love!

[cafe_blu_fics]

yeah, you're right, it was very abrupt. i was kinda trying to suprise the reader but... maybe i just made the whole thing disjointed. i dunno. either way, im excited about this one! (mostly cause its short so it wont take me a million years to finish!)