The Soul

Dec 29, 2006 00:14

Title: The Soul
Arc: Definition of Soul
Rating: R for the arc, G for the drabble
Warnings: series spoilers, hints of elricest
Summary: If the difference between human and homunculus is the possession of soul, how, then, does one define the soul? Al/Wrath
Previous: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8
Note: This is not the end.

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fic, definition of soul, al/wrath, fma

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I am a horr for angst... I love it, yet write fluff... and then you angst and do it well! havocmangawip December 29 2006, 07:49:47 UTC
I haven't read the earlier parts... YET.

This part is descriptive enough and GOOD enough to stand alone.

Excellent job. All I've been able to do of late is fluff. XD

(Chapter 40 is finished, save for a witty capping off last sentence and a title.)

Excuse me if this isn't too coherant... 2 jack and diet cokes... medicinal purposes. ;) I think I need Jameson instead, it's smoother.

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Re: I am a horr for angst... I love it, yet write fluff... and then you angst and do it well! infinitesimi December 31 2006, 16:42:46 UTC
jameson is excellent medicine!

and i horr for angst as well CLEARLY

but your fluff is so GUD!

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dacnis December 30 2006, 05:38:53 UTC
That's really nice! Must go read the other parts now.

Very bleak, lonely atmosphere, and completely believable Wrath, especially like how he compares himself to Envy.

Thanks for posting!

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infinitesimi December 31 2006, 16:43:51 UTC
thanks for reading. wrath is such a tragic creature isnt he?

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orion117 December 30 2006, 15:07:13 UTC
It is interesting to see the aftermath of the series (and Al) through Wrath's eyes. I enjoyed reading the arc. The two sentences at the end of this one, where Wrath contrasts himself to Envy, capture the difference between them very well.

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infinitesimi December 31 2006, 16:45:16 UTC
thanks for reading. there is so much to do with the aftermath of the series, fic-wise, but i never thought id be much interested in wrath. yet, here it is!

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inari_laikvendi December 31 2006, 16:26:03 UTC
I love Wrath, I love angst and I love your fic! :)
Waiting for the next chapters!

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infinitesimi December 31 2006, 16:45:47 UTC
thanks! i was originally planning just one more part, but it might be two.

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inari_laikvendi December 31 2006, 17:07:42 UTC
They should be touchy and tragic! ;)

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