ST XI Fiction: Then and Now

[caera1996]

 
Title: Then and Now

Author: Caera1996

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Please. Is this even necessary?

Summary: This was written in response to the following (truncated) request: Years and years ago, Bones was raped, and it really messed him up. Now he's with Jim, and they are attempting to have their first sexual encounter. It's very slow, very gentle, and

Comments

[sororexitium]

Um...whoa! That was jawdropping. Well done, all of it. Bones' panic, Jim reassuring him.

The last two lines were killer.

Great job. That's a hard thing to write about and you handled it well.

[caera1996]

Oh, thank you so much. I was so unsure about this one...your comment is a relief. Thanks for taking the time to write!

[lisamariedavis]

Wow. That was brilliant. Really. You did an amazing job.

[caera1996]

Thanks so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.

[just_jane_doe]

So well written - you really captured the intense fear and helplessness. Jim's compassion and patience. This is such a hard topic to tackle and then actually express this well. Thanks for sharing.

[caera1996]

Thank you very much! I had very much hoped that the emotions of the characters would be strong enough...thank you for taking the time to comment.

[secretsolitaire]

Eep, this is harrowing. *hugs Bones* Nicely done.

[caera1996]

It was harrowing to write. Thank you, and thanks for commenting!

[disturbinglynic]

wow. you did a really amazing job with this. really. bravo.

[caera1996]

Thank you so much! And thank you for commenting!