Love love love love love love. Sorry that this comment is short, I hijacked my mom's laptop since mine's kaput and she's almost home from work so this is a stealth mission! I LOVE IT SO FAR. AWESOME.
Btw, you said you were channeling my muse...after reading this I must be channeling yours too *Shifty*
Okay gotta go. But amazing stuff. Can't wait for the rest!
I absolutely love this, I have to be honest and say, I'm heart broken, in pain over Mark, you have done really good with this. Please update part two soon.
I told myself that I can't handle angst at the moment because right now, I just need some happiness for Mark and Lexie but you wrote this and I LOVE everything you write and you write angst just so damn good. I have been so excited for this story and you did not disappoint in the least. I cannot wait to read more. Just Mark's pain... you are incredible and my stomach is in knots and I actually feel tears start to form in my eyes. Sorry if this review is all over the place right now. I think I need to go read it again and think of something more eloquent to say. I can't wait for more.
Lol, you know, as I was writing this, I thought it was angst. But, when I was reading it over, I was like "this isn't depressing enough to be angst!" XD But, it's good to know you consider it as such since that's what I wanted to do! And I'm glad I didn't disappoint you either =) This first part changed a lot from what I had in mind, and I admit, I'm not as fond of it as I am of the second. If it makes you feel better, the second is less angst-y...I think. Lol.
Thanks for the thoughts! It was awesome feedback XD
Firstly, oh MARK!! The Pain!! You do deserve to be loved and loved for yourself!!
See what your writing is making me do? Talking to imaginary characters as if they are real people with real pain! ^^
I'm a very big fan of the happy ending, but this kind of angst has a cathartic (?) quality one cannot deny.
“I, uh …” Lexie licks her lips and he zeroes in on the action. “Some books you lent me,” she moves her shoulders, and it is an awkward, painful gesture. As angry as I am with Lexie for breaking Mark's heart, this had me aching for her! Poor Lexie! Don't worry, Mark still LOVES YOU!
Imaginary characters?? Blasphemy! Lol. I jest...or do I? *shifty eyes*
Haha. Anyways, can I just say that it pleases me to no end that you said this has a cathartic quality? Precisely what I was going for (hence the name, lol).
I often think that Lexie doesn't come across as sympathetic as I think I'm writing her, which is soooo not what I mean for her *at all.* So, I'm glad you found some sympathy for her in this =)
Wii is so not healthy for me, lol. I played it for EIGHT hours today. YEAH.
Comments 56
Btw, you said you were channeling my muse...after reading this I must be channeling yours too *Shifty*
Okay gotta go. But amazing stuff. Can't wait for the rest!
Reply
I think I remember you saying how yours is going to end...and that's different that mine *shifty eyes* LOL.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Enjoy the Wii, though I hope you update soon. Can't leave me hangin' here! ;)
Reply
The Wii is being thoroughly enjoyed =D Perhaps a little bit TOO much, lol.
Thanks for the comment!
Reply
Reply
Thanks for the thoughts! It was awesome feedback XD
Reply
See what your writing is making me do? Talking to imaginary characters as if they are real people with real pain! ^^
I'm a very big fan of the happy ending, but this kind of angst has a cathartic (?) quality one cannot deny.
“I, uh …” Lexie licks her lips and he zeroes in on the action. “Some books you lent me,” she moves her shoulders, and it is an awkward, painful gesture. As angry as I am with Lexie for breaking Mark's heart, this had me aching for her! Poor Lexie! Don't worry, Mark still LOVES YOU!
Wii is addictive, I know. But more please! :-)
Reply
Haha. Anyways, can I just say that it pleases me to no end that you said this has a cathartic quality? Precisely what I was going for (hence the name, lol).
I often think that Lexie doesn't come across as sympathetic as I think I'm writing her, which is soooo not what I mean for her *at all.* So, I'm glad you found some sympathy for her in this =)
Wii is so not healthy for me, lol. I played it for EIGHT hours today. YEAH.
Reply
Leave a comment