FIC : Tie My Hands (11) : Swim Slash : pg15 (Phelps/Lochte)

[caelumi]

Title: Tie My Hands (11/?)
Pair: MP/RL
Rating: pg15 (for mature language)
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: Starting next week I'll be posting in my new fic-only journal, damningevidence. Please make a note!!

THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Tie My Hands Part 1 // Part

Comments

[sexy_cheetah]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

From Erik's apology to Cullen almost punching out Mike, this was one big AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

In a good way, of course.

[caelumi]

I love when people holler in good ways about my stories. ^_^ Thanks, lol! <333

[24ko]

Same reaction as above: AHHHHHHHH!!!

Poor kid, this shit it tough. :( And um, okay, slitherly, drunk Cullen is possibly the best image you could have given me right about now so massive props (5 midterms this week... Get excited!).

Still good as always! Can't wait to read the next part!

[caelumi]

The thought of slithery!Cullen just makes me laugh inside. I hope it's enough to carry you through the week... dear lord, 5 midterms. I'm soooo glad those days are over. ^_^ <333

[blacksoul89]

Poor Ry bb =(

But you're seriously evil! You can't leave us hanging like this for two chapters in a row! My god!

[caelumi]

I have to stop the chapters somewhere! LOL. I mean... I guess I could just pick a random boring place, but what fun would that be? *evil laughter* ^____^

[blacksoul89]

How about you just don't stop them? =D Sounds like a good solution to me!

[caelumi]

If you can pay me to sit at home and write this, then you've got yourself a deal! ^_____^

[tragycbeauty]

Okay, so before I say anything else I just have to say that you wrote Aaron wearing his glasses and that was awesome.
Ryan is breaking my heart, and I genuinely feel for him, and Erik's apology was so real and it raised my respect for him even more. He's a good guy in a bad situation.
And I was waiting for the ending with my stomach all twisted and then it actually happened and oh my god.
So much love for you at this moment.

[caelumi]

Aaron in his glasses *is* awesome! He looks like a little dork and I want to squeeze him and love him. ^_^ *coughcough* It's funny that Erik did turn out to be such a good guy... I didn't really start him off intending it, but I like the way it's turned out.

<333 You love me for getting Michael run over? ^_^

[tragycbeauty]

The only pictures of bespectacled Aaron that I can find date waaaaay back to Sydney so he's only like 17 and... well let's face it, a bleach-blonde, poofy-haired, gangly adorable mess. So of course I love him more. I would give an arm and a leg for more recent pictures of him with glasses though.
I love you for the dramatic reveal (even though Michael kind of deserved getting hit - karma and all) because I'm a sucker for gasp-inducing drama haha

[datenshiblue]

Good chapter. :) Nice companion to Michael's whole-pov chapter. I like all the guys (and girls) so much. It makes this a pleasure to read and helps with the angst a lot, ;P

The progression of Ryan's emotions is so real, true to life kinda. Stages. Good stuff, mans.

*squishes*

[caelumi]

*squishes back* Thank you, meh darlin'. *pines for joo while you are in class*