The conversation with Erik was fantastic. I'm glad to see the wheels in Mike's head FINALLY turning. Speaking of wheels, the big ol' karma bus (slash car) finally arrived, I see. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you! And yeah, I never wanted to make Erik the villain. He was just in the wrong place at the right time. And no ~_^ Herman was not hurt in the accident, don't worry.
Oh man I was fidgeting so much while he was on the phone with Erik because I knew something bad was going to happen. And when the bus stopped I let out a breath from relief, which completely floored me when the car came. Also, this was a hallelujah moment for me: "Really? One-you're the least queer queer I know, so I doubt a grown-up commitment on your part would involve valences. If anything you two would have the ugliest place ever because I know for a fact your idea of decorating is a flat screen and last night’s Chinese boxes. Two-just because you're with the guy doesn't mean that you have to buy a cottage together and play My Two Dads." Sing it, Erik. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm kinda jonesing on Erik being Mike's voice of reason. He has to do something to redeem himself, anyway, lol. And I'm happy to know that the car kinda caught you off guard, because it's hard to write something like that and make someone genuinely surprised at it. Thanks. ^_____^
Love, love, love the Erik Vendt parts, especially for calling MP on his shit (and Rowdy Gaines for being an annoying, fawning fanboy on NBC). Glad he wasn't a douche about his part in all of this, and for reading the whole story in Ryan's face in that moment.
I'm so not even awake to comment tonight, but I went and gave Kyle his proper name. THANK YOU, lol. It makes so much sense now why I could never find him on Google. *head desks*
See, I knew he was the Butler--if only I could have used that in the story >< LOL. I seriously tried to Google his ass so many times and wondered why nothing came up. *le sigh* I'll blame it on my editor. ~_^ But thanks for telling me.
DUDE when Rowdy yelled that Mike was magical I seriously bust a gut laughing. No joke. I said that for a week, everything was magical. <33333
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And mad proprs for Erik. He was the voice of reason here, and I am glad that HE atleast feels bad for ryan.
I was big time :( at Mike being sad at the boys choosing sides.
All in all? So SO AMAZING!
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Also, this was a hallelujah moment for me:
"Really? One-you're the least queer queer I know, so I doubt a grown-up commitment on your part would involve valences. If anything you two would have the ugliest place ever because I know for a fact your idea of decorating is a flat screen and last night’s Chinese boxes. Two-just because you're with the guy doesn't mean that you have to buy a cottage together and play My Two Dads."
Sing it, Erik.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Can't wait to see how it all comes together.
Bitty quibble: It's Kyle Deery ;D
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DUDE when Rowdy yelled that Mike was magical I seriously bust a gut laughing. No joke. I said that for a week, everything was magical. <33333
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