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cadmiumyellow7

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Nov 04, 2010 20:32

Everybody has a place where they belong ( Read more... )

lj idol, prince charming

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lilycobalt November 7 2010, 01:09:03 UTC

I want to know how this continues. Nice entry!

cadmiumyellow7 November 13 2010, 17:15:31 UTC

I"m hoping to be able to tie in all of these entries.

Thank you for kind words!

abangaku November 7 2010, 05:38:48 UTC

"There was also her", and I don't know who she is, I don't know who the narrator is... love the sense of dislocation here at the beginning, even as you talk about place. And of course, I always love tough girls....

cadmiumyellow7 November 13 2010, 17:16:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that not designating who she is has worked for this entry. I wasn't sure if it would.

puppetmaker40 November 7 2010, 16:07:42 UTC

Good use of descriptive language.

I am also looking forward to where this goes.

cadmiumyellow7 November 13 2010, 17:16:57 UTC

Thank you! Hopefully, I'll be able to tie in everything.

lawchicky November 7 2010, 20:00:24 UTC

Aww, very sweet!

cadmiumyellow7 November 13 2010, 17:17:20 UTC

Thank you!

antianhedonia November 7 2010, 20:34:42 UTC

Lovely writing.

cadmiumyellow7 November 13 2010, 17:17:34 UTC

Thank you!

Is that an eclair in your user pic?