Poke Prompts

Jul 18, 2010 12:37

 So I decided to get my butt in gear and do the pokeprompts challenge.

Title: Freedom Sends Things Out of Sight
Author: caddyeverafter7 
Rating: T - pg15
Verse: Games, Gen III
Characters: Leaf, Green (Falkner's mentioned once)
Summary: Leaf and Green's rough and tumble adventures together.  Warning:  implied, suggestive, locking just in case, mild cussing.  Yeah.  This is about ( Read more... )

writing, oldrivalshipping, pokemon, fic

Leave a comment

Comments 5

mangobug July 18 2010, 19:59:24 UTC
"Green wants to melt into a puddle (except that's extremely girly and he would never, ever, melt into a puddle)"
um that's kind of the most adorable thing I've ever read. <3

Also I myself have practically melted into a puddle with how adorable this fic is. I loved how adventurous Leaf was here. There was something super charming about being gung-ho to leave for an entirely different country just for a new electric pokemon. :) Well done!!

Reply

caddyeverafter7 July 18 2010, 20:15:39 UTC
Thanks so much :) I was so nervous about this because I've never read a lot of oldrivalshipping and I've never even written for this couple and some of the songs were ridiculous and the stories strayed off track of what the songs were saying, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

And um, that's like the most adorable thing I've ever written :P <33

Reply


kouriko July 19 2010, 02:09:53 UTC
Aww, I liked these! They were fun reads. I like how you wrote the intense chemistry between these two characters.

"Fine," he shouts back. "We'll share the bed!" The silence was so thick that he could have cut it with a knife, and Green wants to slap himself, but Leaf shrugs.

I loved this one! Haha. Great job,

Reply

kouriko July 19 2010, 02:10:23 UTC
I hate not being able to edit. xD

Great job!*

Reply

caddyeverafter7 July 19 2010, 02:14:42 UTC
Haha, thanks :) I'm glad you liked it because really, I had no idea what I was doing when I was writing. I don't think I was half conscious because I don't remember writing half the stuff I wrote ;) <3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up