Thank god you they are all alive and safe! I love how the way the whole story was described, making it so real and critical. I really like how each and every character were paired up with someone else, all of them thinking about their other teammates.
The ending with the love confession was really nice and realistic. (making me once again thank you for letting them live.)
Overall, this was really wonderful and striking! And also, I take this as a chance to wish you a very very late Happy Birthday!
I'm glad they're safe, whew... thye description with the earthquake was very much detailed, that I felt like seeing the scenes :D
the ending was really sweet. it's (kind of) common(?) for a love confessions to happen ,after what seems to be a life-and-death situation. yay for them :D
... I shall try to be coherent now: Thank you very, very much for writing this piece (believe me, that plot bunny has been haunting me for years) - the descriptions were stunningly realistic and the developement was made of win. I really liked the way you portrayed the characters; especially Eiji, Fuji and Tezuka - and the end, the end! ... I just love drama and angst if somehow all ends well. But if you'd have an idea for another ending - I'd be glad to read that, too!
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The ending with the love confession was really nice and realistic. (making me once again thank you for letting them live.)
Overall, this was really wonderful and striking! And also, I take this as a chance to wish you a very very late Happy Birthday!
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You have to thank paranoid_fridge for letting them survive it was her prompt (and condition)
I'm really glad you liked it.
Don't worry about being late cuz you are very very late (My real BD is different from what I put on LJ)
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the earthquake was so intense and i can even FEEL them. Luckily no one died, if not i'll crys my heart out..:D
i like this fic and thank you for sharing! ^^
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I'm terribly afraid of earthquakes so sorry I made you Feel it.
Thanks for reading and commenting
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thye description with the earthquake was very much detailed, that I felt like seeing the scenes :D
the ending was really sweet. it's (kind of) common(?) for a love confessions to happen ,after what seems to be a life-and-death situation.
yay for them :D
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LOL, I wrote the fic then realised that there was much TEFU in it and since I'm lazy I didnt want to rewrite the entire thing so hence cliche ending.
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was not much TEFU
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^_____^
... I shall try to be coherent now: Thank you very, very much for writing this piece (believe me, that plot bunny has been haunting me for years) - the descriptions were stunningly realistic and the developement was made of win.
I really liked the way you portrayed the characters; especially Eiji, Fuji and Tezuka - and the end, the end! ... I just love drama and angst if somehow all ends well. But if you'd have an idea for another ending - I'd be glad to read that, too!
Thank you very, very much!
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Another ending?? not really atleast not at this time.
You're sooooo welcomed
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