Great job--the storyline sounds very interesting to me. I haven't heard any stories set on Europa yet (but then again, I don't have time to read very much...). Were you thinking of the environment under Europa's surface ice being liquid or gaseous? Liquid is the current theory, which would require some minor changes if you wanted to incorporate that. If gaseous, maybe you could explain that by having caverns filled with bubbles of oxygen/whatever trapped in inhabited areas that are created by outlets from volcanic vents, or something. That, or you could have an intelligent species that created artificial structures to sustain themselves (maybe originating from a different place?) I am quite good at writing, if you want me to gramatically proof-read some text for you. I can see a couple of improvements for the story above. If you want me to do this, email me a text version and I will email you back a suggested version: violet.taylor@asu.edu . I don't have time to do this for a novel-sized version, but I will help you out on a couple
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Well, thank you for the offer but I'm writing this for a scholarship and I'm not even 1/5 of the way done so I have to proofread later. I'm actually an English freak, myself. I'll get around to it...One day. Thank you for the suggestions but it isn't set in a liquid enviornment at all; yes, it is more of a gaseous biosphere. Anyway, the story has only begun. I'll take what you said and try to use it. Thank you again.
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