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AU Gibbs/DiNozzo: Drabble Challenge #423 - Flame

Feb 08, 2015 21:21

Title: Flame
Author: cackymn_lj
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Anthony DiNozzo (slash)
Rating: G
Challenge: ncis_drabble Challenge 423 Flame
Words: 300
Disclaimer: Disclaimed
Note: AU, Angst
Summary: A response to a lovely dark prompt by laiajambalaya in tibbs_bunnies on Wednesday, Feb. 4, 2015. Prompt in quotes, story below ( Read more... )

sci-fi, fic, ncis_drabble, gibbs/dinozzo, angst, slash, au, fanfiction

Comments 13

ferneberga February 9 2015, 12:01:45 UTC

Very tragic :-(

cackymn_lj February 9 2015, 14:24:55 UTC

IKR?
Thanks for reading!

ncisvu_lj February 9 2015, 19:23:31 UTC

I keep trying to review this but I'm so at a loss for words! It's beautifully devastating. Your words, the imagery, everything builds into something magnificent that I'm not even sure I fully understand but that's okay because it all means so much and I love it so very much!!

cackymn_lj February 10 2015, 02:07:19 UTC

Thank you! There might be more.... I've never written any kind of AU or sci-fi, but Laia's prompt grabbed me.
As always I appreciate your words so much!

hawk_soaring February 9 2015, 23:12:05 UTC

So heartbreaking.

cackymn_lj February 10 2015, 02:08:14 UTC

Yeah my chest hurts.
Thanks so very much for checking it out.

joss80 February 27 2015, 04:59:48 UTC

Oh wow this is so complex and ethereal and amazingly detailed that I have this picture in my head of something that I can't quite grasp and it's weird and wonderful and thrilling and I just wrote a REALLY long sentence.
Good stuff.

cackymn_lj February 27 2015, 05:03:23 UTC

GOOD sentence. Good Cowbell. Good grief I'm silly. I don't know what kind of grasp I will attain either. It's scary. Thank you so much! <3

joss80 February 27 2015, 05:08:54 UTC

LOL one can always use more cowbell :)

cackymn_lj February 27 2015, 05:13:28 UTC

And more Lee Adama in a towel, ROFL!

Thread 5

tonysmel February 27 2015, 19:56:53 UTC

Every time I read this it crushes my heart a little more.
And yet...I'm not afraid of the darkness, especially when being led by such an able guide. Your imagery has an uncompromising edge to it, and yet there's a beauty there. And Gibbs, so hopeless and angry, left alone in the darkness without his beloved light.
This guts me, but at the same time, I love it when writers let their muse take them to new and scarey places. And this is amazing.

cackymn_lj February 27 2015, 20:57:35 UTC

Thank you again! It's scary for me too. It looks like it wants to go places.
I really appreciate you. Sad rica can be hard. I often avoid them. So thanks for staying with. It will get worse, but not forever!