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owensheart March 23 2012, 12:59:52 UTC
So beautiful and so sad.

Great work.

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ca_te March 24 2012, 10:22:22 UTC
I'm happy that you liked this and that you keep reading this series! :)

Thank you very much!

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geekslave March 23 2012, 15:14:55 UTC
So glad to get to read this from Merlin's perspective. His confusion over his feelings for Arthur now and in the past, and how it's all tangled together, was really well written. His ache for Arthur is so sad and beautiful. Those two crazy kids love each other so much, I hope when they meet that they can start sorting this all out and finally be happy together.

Stacey

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ca_te March 24 2012, 10:23:13 UTC
I'm glad that you liked this take on Merlin's POV! Thank you very much! :)

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bumerbmw March 24 2012, 19:31:45 UTC
why this verse is so damn beautiful and heartbreaking?
But I still love every moment of it!

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ca_te March 24 2012, 20:16:10 UTC
Your comment just made my day. Thank you so much!

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echoing_seas March 25 2012, 02:37:32 UTC
This was such a powerful and sad update! I loved the descriptions of Merlin's emotions, and his pain was so strong and detailed. I'm glad he's asked to see Arthur, and I can't wait to read the next update!

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ca_te March 25 2012, 09:50:31 UTC
I'm really glad to know that you liked this part, dear! To know that you keep reading this series really makes me happy :)

Thank you very much! I'll try to post an update soon! :)

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echoing_seas March 26 2012, 23:59:24 UTC
Of course, and you're more than welcome for the reply!

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archaeologist_d March 25 2012, 15:58:43 UTC
So very sad and confusing for the poor guy. I liked how he couldn't tell if it was the boy or the long-ago Arthur that he felt so strongly about. Great job.

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ca_te March 25 2012, 17:23:29 UTC
Indeed, poor Merlin! I'm glad that you liked that, darling. Thank you very much!

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