Glee rpf| That secret place inside of you

Jan 11, 2012 20:34

Title: That secret place inside of you
Author: ca_te
Pairing: Darren/Chris
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Notes: This is part 7 of "The light that you carry inside" Series
Disclaimer: Nothing of this has happened in reality. It's all fictional!

That secret place inside of you )

the light that you carry inside, chris colfer, darren criss, rpf, genre: romance, rating: nc-17, fandom: glee

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apleby_arrow January 11 2012, 20:47:56 UTC
Oh my heart. That part was so soft, so touching.

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:21:30 UTC
I'm happy that you think so! Thank you for following this verse! :)

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mander3_swish January 11 2012, 22:07:36 UTC
beautiful.

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:21:45 UTC
Thank you!!

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midlifecrisses January 11 2012, 22:19:37 UTC
Holy Hell!! That was... that was... the longing...the ambiguity... the different perspectives and my god the writing!!

"It’s like being closed in a glass box, and Darren knows that if Chris is on the other side he would keep hitting the glass over and over, trying to get to him."

What can I do but weep at its perfection and beauty!!!!

CrissColfer perfection!

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typegirl19 January 12 2012, 01:31:58 UTC
Oh that was my favorite line. The visual in my head. So moving!!!

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:22:59 UTC
I'm happy that you liked that image too! Thank you!

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:22:32 UTC
Wow, your comment totally made mt day! I'm so happy that you think so!

Thank you very much!

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harmony_lover January 12 2012, 00:02:57 UTC
This is gorgeously written. Just beautifully expressed, every word of it.

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:23:29 UTC
I'm glad that you think so! Thank you very much! :)

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punkkitten2113 January 12 2012, 00:08:39 UTC
That was just lovely, darling! The entire thing seems so ethereal, so dreamlike with the way the edges of the scene are blurred. I love the way you phrase certain lines as well - It’s just a simple touch, and yet it holds everything inside- promises of time spent together, of breathy laughs and morning kisses and something seems to dilate and vaporize inside of him - it makes me think of how Darren speaks, and that's important for RPF. It really feels like we're in his head here.

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ca_te January 12 2012, 16:25:43 UTC
Awww thank you, dear! I'm so happy you think I managed to convey Darren well! Thank you so much for following this story and for your kind comments <3

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