Nabari no Ou/ Being human

Jul 22, 2009 12:25

You like to walk. Sometimes it’s painful, but you still like it. To feel your muscles going in the right place, your bones slowly cracking to life. Your knees are like flat little balls but they still work.

You like to walk everywhere. On train platforms, on crowded sidewalks, on desert paths in parks. Walking makes your blood run faster. Once ( Read more... )

fanfiction, genre: romance, fandom: nabari no ou, genre: angst, nabari no ou character: yoite, nabari no ou character: miharu

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ca_te July 22 2009, 12:04:26 UTC
Thank you, dear!
I'm really glad you liked it!
Yep actually I really wanted to deal with the theme in a real way^^ I'm glad you find it affecting!

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sabriel75 July 22 2009, 12:08:46 UTC
Oh such a delicate foil between life and death and love and pain... your use of fence brilliantly executed as a metaphor with the comparison to the real, solid thing holding them up versus the intangible emotions slowing them down.

Lovely!

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ca_te July 22 2009, 12:13:04 UTC
Oh thank you, darling!
I'm so happy you liked the use I made of the fence!^^
Eh actually when writing about Yoite and Miharu lately I can't avoid writing about life and death. Poor Yoite.

Thanks again for this comment, which really made me happy :)

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