Comments | ca_teonatrain: Nabari no Ou/ Slipping on his smile

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Nabari no Ou/ Slipping on his smile

Jul 16, 2009 15:21

They told you that you would be invincible. You weren’t listening. You just looked at the scroll the old man was holding in his hands. You thought his eyes looked like the grey concrete of the basement you lived in for so long. Your brother had brown eyes. And he used to crouch down in front of the narrow window of the basement. You used to think ( Read more... )

fanfiction, genre: romance, fandom: nabari no ou, genre: angst, nabari no ou character: yoite, nabari no ou character: miharu

Comments 12

hattukissa July 16 2009, 14:41:42 UTC

I really have no words to describe how much I really like your fanfics, there's nothing I would change about them! You have this very amazing way of creating different atmospheres and feelings.
Miharu and Yoite are both always IC too!

ca_te July 16 2009, 15:07:35 UTC

Aww thank you, darling! <3
I'm really so happy that you like the way I write and that you continue to read my works^^
Oh I'm really glad you think they are in character, 'cause I'm always a bit worried about it^^

hattukissa July 16 2009, 16:30:30 UTC

You're welcome!
I'm usually quite lazy about writing comments but I just feel like I have to tell you how much I wish you'll continue writing these enjoyable stories <3

ca_te July 16 2009, 18:20:13 UTC

Oh this really makes me so incredibly happy! <3
Of course I'll try to continue^^ Thanks so much for your support!

eiei July 16 2009, 17:27:46 UTC

Very sad and beautiful. I love the imagery and the atmosphere.
Aww poor Yoite, the way you've written it, made me really really feel for him.

ca_te July 16 2009, 18:21:38 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really happy you liked it!^^
Oh sorry, it's just that somehow I really can't separate Yoite and sadness sometimes.
Thank you very much for reading!^___^

darth_sakura July 16 2009, 18:06:17 UTC

I think is simply beautiful. You can convey his way of thinking very believable to be Yoite's. I enjoyed this fic very much ^_^

ca_te July 16 2009, 18:22:51 UTC

Thank you! Oh I'm really happy you think that and that you enjoyed it!^____^
Thank you a lot for reading and commenting!

twirble July 16 2009, 21:36:34 UTC

When I read gorgeously written fanfiction like this, I just have to ask if you have any original work online we can drool over.

ca_te July 17 2009, 08:58:53 UTC

Oh thank you so so much! >///< This really makes me happy!
Well I'm italian so my original works are in italian and not online but I may try to translate something or to write something original in english from the start if you'd like to read it^____^

littlelinor July 17 2009, 02:53:32 UTC

Oh gods. I've always loved your fics, but this?
This is a masterpiece. I just love its atmosphere and construction.
Also
Miharu is too alive for you. And he is too silent for the rest of the world.
Favourite sentence.

ca_te July 17 2009, 09:00:45 UTC

Oh! Darling! I'm really so happy to hear this from you <33
Thank you so much! >//<
I'm glad you liked that line^^