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shimotsuki August 8 2010, 22:10:57 UTC
I like this a lot -- especially the way it sets up a difference between what Jack looks like and how he really is.

Then his grandmother had died, she did it gently and peacefully as she used to do everything in her life, but it left a hole in Jack’s small heart.

That's lovely and sad. Poor Jack! But I like the idea that his love of reading reminds him of his grandmother.

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ca_te August 9 2010, 07:26:55 UTC
I'm glad that it worked for you, and that you don't think that the way I see his love for reading is not too stupid.

Thank you!

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rinhail August 9 2010, 10:20:47 UTC
Its been a while since you wrote, I almost feared you'd given up. But then you come back with something refreshing to the soul. I love these two characters you've created (especially Jack) and the quiet way they go about their love affair. Everytime I read something involving them I read with a smile.

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ca_te August 9 2010, 13:40:59 UTC
Hey, darling! Oh of course I could never give up writing! :) I was just away on holiday.
I'm really happy that you like these characters and that they make you smile!
Thank you very much! <3

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rinhail August 11 2010, 13:50:33 UTC
Oh, I hope you had fun! :)

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ca_te August 9 2010, 13:43:06 UTC
Thank you, bb!! <3 it was very sweet of you to read this! And your comment definitely is a very sensible one :)
Also your icon is lovely! :3

*hugs*

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ca_te August 9 2010, 22:14:48 UTC
Oh that's really sweet of you, darling! Thank you :)
I'm glad that you decided to read this even though it is original, if you want you can find more stories about these two characters under the tag "original fic" :)

Thank you a lot again because you really made me smile with this comment!

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bright_blonde August 13 2010, 03:48:52 UTC
dawwwww, i love them! its fun to hear from jack, after all the time i'm spending with tom. =)

i love the image of baby!jack reading the backs of medication packaging. =)

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ca_te August 13 2010, 08:02:06 UTC
Eheh I'm glad that you think so! I've decided to add Jack's POV to the story too, you'll see in the next part that I'll send you :)

Ah I'm happy that you liked that! Indeed it was something that I used to do when I was little and had just learnt the basics of reading eheh

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bright_blonde August 13 2010, 17:19:20 UTC
yay jack!

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ca_te August 14 2010, 23:29:13 UTC
I'm glad that you like him! =)

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