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Merlin RPS/ Taking photos

Jul 10, 2010 20:45

( Taking photos )

merlin rps, merlin rps character: colin, fanfiction, genre: romance, rating: pg, merlin rps character: bradley, genre: fluff

Comments 12

zafra July 10 2010, 19:11:41 UTC

Awww! So lovely and schmoopy I just want to smish them! *smish*

ca_te July 11 2010, 20:41:35 UTC

I'm glad you liked this! :) Thank you for reading and commenting!

newbiereader July 10 2010, 21:20:09 UTC

A sweet story. Just one tiny thing - you say that Colin is more beautiful than "any other girl" Bradley has seen. Since Colin isn't actually a girl, you should leave out the word 'other'. Hope you don't mind me pointing it out.

ca_te July 11 2010, 20:42:35 UTC

I'm happy that you think so :) Oh thank you! I've corrected it, and of course I don't mind, you were really nice pointing it out :)

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ca_te July 11 2010, 20:43:11 UTC

Aww thank you, sweetie!! ♥ I'm so happy that you liked this! :)

junkshop_disco July 11 2010, 09:29:52 UTC

Aww, this is just adorable. I love the idea of unrequited butterflies ♥:

ca_te July 11 2010, 20:44:40 UTC

Thank you, darling!♥ It makes me really happy to know that you think so considering that I love how you write the two of them! :)

archaeologist_d July 11 2010, 14:17:30 UTC

Very sweet. I liked the gentleness of it.

ca_te July 11 2010, 20:43:44 UTC

I'm happy that you liked it. Thank you very much.