Merlin RPS/ Unexplored

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Comments

[minerva7]

I really liked the slow contemplating pace of this piece, following Bradley's reflections - and your metaphors were exceptionally astute. Lovely piece of art with a wonderful last sentence!
He once more imagines his hands sliding over the smooth surface of Colin’s chest, and tights, and cheeks, tracing all the lines and the curves and the twists, as the pen of a cartographer would trace the lines and curves of lakes, mountains and rivers.

[ca_te]

Oh I'm so happy that you liked this, and the metaphors which I decidd to use. Oh you make me blush >//< I'm glad that you liked that bit!
Thank you very much for reading and for leaving this kind comment!

[sternenlichtx]

liked it very much. I love it when Bradley is not always loud and boisterous but quiet and contemplative as well. Thanks for posting

[ca_te]

I'm glad that you liked me portraying him like that, it's that I think that he definitely has a more contemplative side hidden somewhere eheh
Thanks to you for reading and commenting :)

[archaeologist_d]

This was sweet and a nice slow buildup. Well done.

[ca_te]

I'm happy that you liked this and that you think so. Thank you very much! :)

[ariadnechan]

he is so in love with Colin!
everytime Brad is watching him! I love this

[ca_te]

I'm really glad that you enjoyed thus!
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[echoing_seas]

I love how to showed the build of the relationship from Bradley, pov, and his emotions :D Beautifully written!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing :)

[ca_te]

I'm glad that you liked that aspect :) Thank you so much! And thanks to you for reading and leaving such a nice comment :)