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death note/ Normality

Mar 05, 2010 18:09

death note character: light, death note character: sayu, death note character: soichiro, fanfiction, fandom: death note, death note character: sachiko, rating: pg, genre: general

Comments 6

powdered_opium March 7 2010, 16:28:10 UTC

This is really amazing. Really, really amazing. I've never actually thought about Sachiko as a character before, because, hey, she doesn't blow things up, kill criminals with notebooks, or resemble a panda. Ergo, she gets less notice from people, methinks. But this...I can actually see this happening, and you can see the beginnings of Light's superiority complex, which I find disturbing and brilliant. The characterisation is excellent, and I love the way you present the dialogue, without using speech marks, it's very original. The ending line is SO, SO perfect.
Anyway, I loves it, and I'll stop rambling now ^^

ca_te March 8 2010, 01:30:03 UTC

Whoah thank you! Really you make me blush! >///<
Eheh indeed you are right, she usually is a character about which nobody talks 'cause she is just normal. I'm really glad that you liked the characterisation, 'cause indeed it was what worried me more, considering that this is the first time that I write about the Yagami family^^

Really thank you so much for reading and commenting! Your comment really made me happy!^^

powdered_opium March 8 2010, 17:00:53 UTC

No, thank you for giving the world something so easy on the eyes ^^ Is this seriously the first time you've written the Yagami family troupe? I wouldn't have been able to tell, not at all. I'm glad you liked the comment. I've actually been a fan of your stuff for a while yet, but never commented (like that MattxMello fic, with Matt as a photographer? I really, really loved that one. I used to check for updates and everything, but I was too shy to comment. I'll go comment properly on that later). I never really commented on fanfics till I started posting them up on my LJ, and realised how happy comments made me...so I felt that people who wrote beautiful things like this deserved good reviews. Thus began my new resolution ^^
Anyway, the characterisation was perfect darling! And I'm rambling again...I'll stop. Like now x

ca_te March 9 2010, 17:02:16 UTC

Yup it's the first time^^ And really thank you!! For a writer to know that someone can like so much something that I write is really so important to me^^ And aww I'm so happy that you have been following what I write!! I didn't know that! And in particular I'm happy that you liked "My photographer" 'cause I've always thought it was not such a good multichapter story.
Ah I definitely have to read some of your fics then when I'll be a bit less busy ^^

Thank you very much again darling, really! ^^

rinhail March 9 2010, 16:18:58 UTC

Perfect portrayal of Light interacting with his family. And Sayu was too cute wanting a puppy. :D

ca_te March 9 2010, 16:58:39 UTC

Oh I'm so happy that you think so! :) Yhanks for reading darling <3