Comments | ca_teonatrain: original fic/ As sunlight (1/?)

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original fic/ As sunlight (1/?)

Feb 16, 2010 17:39

When she asked for a puppy James really didn’t know what to do. It was a Sunday morning, it was spring, he can remember that because there was a warm sun-light splashing on the carpet of the living room. Well at least he used to call it living room, in reality he was living in a one room apartment, and what he called living room were a couch and an ( Read more... )

chapter, story: as sunlight, original fic, genre: general, rating: g

Comments 6

tierfal February 17 2010, 04:38:30 UTC

This is really adorable, hon! :) The description of the room at the beginning is lovely, and I especially enjoyed how slowly and softly the backstory unfolded. All the little details of the past were wonderfully woven-in, too. It's all very nice! ^^

ca_te February 17 2010, 08:38:59 UTC

Oh thank you darling! I'm really glad that you liked this, and really I thank you a lot 'cause it's the first time I post a real original work here and I really needed feedback *hugs* And really your comment gives me strength ^^

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ca_te February 19 2010, 09:14:46 UTC

First of all really thank you a lot for reading this! It's really important for me :) This is still a bit different from what I write in Italian but it's what gets more close if compared to fanfics. I'm really happy then that you liked this :) I hope I can go on with this story ^^ Also I don't remember if in the end I sent you again the Italian story I had once sent you...

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ca_te February 19 2010, 13:45:38 UTC

Thank you!! :)

Yeah I understand what you mean, normally I hate that too, but well it's what many average parents would do, that's why I wrote it^^ And well I still don't know where the story will go XD

Oh sorry for that! I'm going to send it to you right away :)

lybell February 20 2010, 19:42:29 UTC

I really love this! ^____^ There were a few places that could use editing (only because English isn't your first language). But it was so evocative and bright and gentle, and pulled me in like your stories always do.

I hope you write more original stuff! ^____^ ♥

ca_te February 20 2010, 19:57:29 UTC

Oh thank you darling!! I wasn't expecting you to read this and it made me su utterly happy! Indeed I think I should find a beta at least for the original works. Really your comment makes my heart burst with joy, 'cause this is actually the first original fic I've ever posted here :)

Thank you! I hope I'll manage to go on with this story ^^