Comments | ca_teonatrain: loveless/ Your own little sun

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loveless/ Your own little sun

Jan 27, 2010 10:15

( You tilt your head to the side, the sounds Ritsuka is making echo in the kitchen. )

fanfiction, genre: romance, rating: pg, genre: angst, fandom: loveless

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ca_te January 27 2010, 10:27:59 UTC

Oh you make me blush, darling! I'm so utterly happy that you think this! You know how much I take into consideration your opinion!
Eh I've been writing original fics in Italian for a while and I totally hope that what you say will come true! ^^
Oh I'm going to correct it right away :)

Really thank you from the bottom of my heart for this comment, it makes the writer within me jump for the joy eheh :)

whatablow January 27 2010, 11:54:43 UTC

Beautiful <3
You really caught Soubi's and Ritsuka's personality perfectly in such a small story which is even harder to do.
Really well done :D

ca_te January 27 2010, 11:59:01 UTC

Oh thank you very much! I'm really happy that you think I caught them well^___^
Thanks for reading and commenting <3

may_unleashed January 27 2010, 20:03:20 UTC

It's been a long while since I read a second-person perspective story.

I had forgotten how powerful they can be. And how words so masterfully chosen and imagery so carefully crafted can cut into the reader.

Soubi's inner narrative is dark and almost oppresive, until the moment his eyes find Ritsuka navigating around his kitchen.

Then, truly, your story makes me feel like it's the sun appearing after night time. The comparison between Ritsuka and Seimei is so cruel, but then again, that is the point.

Thanks so much for sharing, I hope you bring us more fantastic fics!

ca_te January 27 2010, 21:04:17 UTC

Thank you so very much! <3 I'm so super happy that you liked so many things about my fic ^___^ And yeah I can't help but compare Semei and Ritsuka when it comes to Soubi. I'm also happy that I could convey what I wanted, which is quite important for a writer :)
So again thank you so much for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment!
I'll try to write more over Loveless then :)

may_unleashed January 27 2010, 22:04:48 UTC

Well, we are grateful to you for writing the story. XD

Usually you write in the Death Note fandom, deshou? It would be fantastic to read your works in other verses as well.

I usually yearn for understanding Italian so I could read works by Italian people in their original form. I think it's such a beautiful language.

And by the way...your quote over there? Neil Gaiman is one of my fixations! As well as Diana Wynne Jones.

I hope my work hours finish soon so I can go back to commuting and listening to my "Neverwhere" audiobook. I love Mr. Gaiman for narrating his own works.

ca_te January 28 2010, 00:43:54 UTC

Thank you again <3

Yep, and well my main other fandom is Nabari no Ou, but I started out with Loveless and at the moment I'm trying to work more on D.gray-man :)

Oh really? ^^ Well I write fanfics only in English, in Italian I mainly write short stories.

Ah yep I totally fell in love with that quote, and actally with Neil Gaiman's works even though I haven't read so many of them so far :)

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ca_te January 27 2010, 21:05:42 UTC

Oh you make my blush >///< Thank you very much! And I'll try to write more then XD

Ah I don't know Japanese neither, I made the dialogue up myself ^^

Thanks to you for reading and commenting <3

prevailingwind January 28 2010, 03:31:09 UTC

As everyone else has said, the fic is perfect in capturing the characters! Love it!

ca_te January 28 2010, 09:28:38 UTC

Thank you! ^___^
Your comment really makes me happy, so thanks for reading and commenting <3