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letter bee/ And I came back looking for you

Dec 30, 2009 16:16

Title: And I came back looking for you
Author:ca_te
Characters: Jiggy Pepper, Gauche Suede
Rating: G
Notes: Probably a bit Au, also considering that well it's not written in the manga that these two were friends but I like to imagine so :3
Disclaimer: I do not own Letter Bee and its characters

( Jiggy looked up to the clouds moving in the dark sky. )

letter bee character: lag, letter bee character: gauche, fanfiction, genre: friendship, fandom: letter bee, rating: g

Comments 4

whispering_eden January 14 2010, 11:48:00 UTC

I like your choice of characters, you reminded me just how similar these two are actually. XP

They make good foils for each other. I liked your description of Jiggy's need to keep moving on and Gauche as being world weary but still gentle was spot on.

Considering we don't know all that much about how these two think, well Jiggy especially, I'd say it was pretty ambitious of you to have them as your main characters. Well done. ^^

ca_te January 14 2010, 12:08:13 UTC

Oh thank you!

Really I was a bit worried about this work, 'cause there is no trace of this friendship in the manga, but it just popped into my mind ^^

I'm glad that you liked the characters' description.

Thank you again for reading and commenting. ^^

whispering_eden January 14 2010, 17:52:24 UTC

You're welcome. It's always great to see fanfiction of small fandoms like this.

The fact that we haven't seen any interaction between the two as of yet just makes it more interesting because they are definately similar to each other. I can kind of see them having a conversation mostly through body language as neither of them are very verbal, everyone else would probably wonder what they were talking about. XD

ca_te January 14 2010, 17:59:00 UTC

You know? I totally think you are right! I'm sure they would understand each other perfectly ^^