Chapter 6 - Calling in a Debt

[ca_pierson]

Disclaimers: Neither the idea of Harry Potter nor the characters belong to me in any way. They are the sole property of JKR. I do not make any money of this story either.

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WOW

[darkmoore]

Yes! That is soooo good! More! That is plain wonderful!

I love how Sev begins to think about the WHY! Why Harry takes all of it, hehe
The look in Harrys eyes and the empty tone of Harry's voice should get to him even more...HEHE...
This is soooooo good!

[jinx15]

I liked it. I felt really bad for Harry, and he's so passive about it. But I guess the guilt was eating at him. But I'm glad to see Severus is finally realizing that revenge is usually just an empty action.

Yes, I know ...

[ca_pierson]

There is a limit to patience and acceptance, but I believed that Harry had a lot to feel guilty about. My main goal was to show his character a little as I see him in this story, his abnormal behaviour in relationships. Just as showing Severus abnormal behaviour. At that point even he wants Harry to fight back and he ought to realise just how badly Harry handles the whole thing soon as well.