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melissasdavid in ca_atlast

Here at the End of All Things

Feb 14, 2011 00:40

Title: Here at the End of All Things
Author: melissasjack
Rating: M
Chapters: 1/2
Genre: Fun, romance, sex, sadness, friendship, LOVE, Cordy and Angel
Prompts Used: ”Here at the end of all things"
Written for: jnb71976(IF I had more time and was NOT a lazy HO Id’ve written MORE. If you or anyone else wants chapter 2, holler, OK??? I have mad ideas for later and ( Read more... )

melissasjack, here at the end of all things (1/1), valentine's day smutathon, pg-13, romance, angst, friendship

Comments 10

aerintine February 14 2011, 22:23:37 UTC

Ohhhh, I love this. How it jumps around in time inside cordy's mind. Her hopes and despair. And a vision for something different, something better. I want more of this!

I just love what you've done with the prompt and I hope we get to see more. Yay!

melissasdavid February 16 2011, 20:13:59 UTC

Hugs and I'm blushing and thanks. I ADORED the prompt sooooo much. Heee!! Cartwheels!!! Sorry for the lack of smut, it is NOT my strong suit lolz... I have one more prompt I willlllllll get up here by tomorrow night ( I HOPE!!) and then I'm gonna see what I can do for this one.. I had to forde myself to stop writing it, so I could start the others LOL. My poor silly ADD brain.

I'm so happy this worked for you. xx Mel

doc_3 February 15 2011, 02:19:21 UTC

Wow... this was ...

I just forget sometimes how these two can make your heart ache, you know? You captured that perfectly here, and it was a great reminder of why I've always loved them.

melissasdavid February 16 2011, 20:14:48 UTC

*hugs and hugs and thanks*

Heeee!!! IKR? These two. Even after all these years. They just get to me. Always. I'm so glad this worked, sweetie. Thank YOU for reading. xxoo Mel

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melissasdavid February 20 2011, 19:02:20 UTC

You know I LOVE you like candy, right? ALWAYS. xxoo

Also? Icon LOVEFEST.

samsom February 20 2011, 04:45:37 UTC

This is how epic is done.

Very, very well done.

Thank you so much for writing this prompt. It was gorgeous the way it jumped in time, Cordelia's memories like a pinwheel, spinning.

melissasdavid February 20 2011, 19:04:10 UTC

My fav C/A writer!!! *yes this is ME squeeeeeing*

Thank YOU for lovely lovely compliment. I SUCK at writing true porn LOL. Like Le Suck.

*massive hugs*

damnskippytoo February 20 2011, 19:43:19 UTC

I'm not sure I grasp everything that's happening here, but it reads like a dream which, maybe(?), is the point. LOL! I kinda suck at anything that doesn't pound me over the head with its point. (Symbolism? Pfft! A stick is a stick dammit!!)

However, what I did get was the whirlwind of emotions Cordelia feels - the great love, the great despair, the great regret, and the great hope. And that hope, in the end, is probably what sets us free.

The ending had me sighing and crying at the same time. (That's good, btw). :D