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boy_named_susie May 6 2007, 15:24:04 UTC
Whew, hot story. *Fans self* Just love it. Ending was perfect, but now I feel kind of bad for poor Doyle.

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samsom May 7 2007, 04:13:46 UTC
Well, someone had to lose, and at that point, it wouldn't have hurt Doyle all that much. *gives Doyle a shot of courage and a plate of cookies* He'll be okay. Until Hero, anyway.

Thanks for liking it. It's always a relief when, after working on it in pieces, people like the end result.

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damnskippytoo May 6 2007, 18:46:37 UTC
Deep, penetrating, it scorched her like napalm.

Just like this fic did. Wowza, baby! That was fabulous. I loved the S1 bickering (the coffee convesation was perfect!) and the way he just lost it and took her. *melts*

She blinked, finding herself straddling his lap. Her robe opened and her flesh dragged along his crotch as he settled her. Her fingers convulsed, digging into the meat of his arms, her body clenching with need.

He reached down and unfastened his pants, pulling his hard cock out, and then opened her robe with sure hands.

“First of all, nothing about this is awkward.” He lifted her a bit and slid her down the length of his erection, and she went boneless, gasping as he filled her. Her body responded so fast it hurt, drenching her channel and slicking his cock.

She stared at him, barely aware of anything but the feeling of him inside her.

*fans self* Oh, man. If only JW's Angel had the balls to do that, we would be one happy C/A fandom.

Pick up your banner!

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samsom May 7 2007, 04:17:44 UTC
Pick up your banner!

It's picked, it's picked!

Thanks for liking it. I wrote it with your reaction in mind. lol. I'm not kidding, the amount of revisions, rewrites and hair-pulling was amazing. There probably will be a sequel because I'm intrigued by the idea of c/a working together while they're a couple. Especially after Cordelia gets the visions. There's an Angel in my head, and he's so alpha male, he's bleeding testosterone. I wanna see where he takes things when it involves Cordelia so personally.

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tootyfnfrooty May 16 2007, 05:02:05 UTC
if only it would have happened like that on the show. *sighs* whedon and co. so totally missed it

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samsom May 24 2007, 05:56:24 UTC
They sure as hell did!

Thanks for liking it:D

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fronatron April 29 2008, 05:24:08 UTC
Wooo HOO that was hot. I really, really liked it. :3

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samsom April 30 2008, 03:31:05 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for reading and feeding me. This was a particular favorite. :D

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