Where I Stood

Nov 28, 2007 14:27

Title: Where I stood
Pairing: Jared/Jensen, Jared/OFC
Rating: PG 13
Summary: What do you do when you love someone too much?
Warnings: Angst, cheating.
Disclaimer: If you think it's real you need to get your head read.

'Cos I don't know who I am, who I am without you
All I know is that I should
And I don't know if I could stand another hand upon you
Read more... )

fic

Leave a comment

Comments 28

jennygeee November 28 2007, 07:49:42 UTC
That was so good I just love the angst, is there any chance of any more of this?

Reply

c_ntbucket November 28 2007, 10:26:33 UTC
Thanks darl.
I haven't thought about writing more, maybe I'll write Jensen's POV one day *shrugs* lol.

Thanks for the wonderful comment.
=D

Reply


agt_league November 28 2007, 10:08:40 UTC
c_ntbucket November 28 2007, 10:29:15 UTC
*hands you soem sticky tape*
Stick your heart back together babe, sorry.

Jard needs a wake up call but well the poor guy is suffering too.

Thanks for the wonderful comment darl.

Reply

agt_league November 28 2007, 10:44:04 UTC
*attempts to put her heart back together*

He is, and he needs his Jensen BAD.

My pleasure. <3

Reply


kezz_14 November 28 2007, 11:44:11 UTC
I love that song. I've never been in love so it always makes me wonder what that feeling of being too in love is and your story elaborates on that perfectly.

Reply

c_ntbucket November 28 2007, 11:48:21 UTC
I've never been in love either so I was kinda writing blind but the song sure helped. I really love that song it really beautiful written.
Thanks for the wonderful comment.
<3

Reply


bonbonschnecke November 28 2007, 12:17:42 UTC
This was so angsty! Please write a sequel and and let them start again...

Reply

c_ntbucket November 28 2007, 12:26:22 UTC
I can only try darl LOL but at the moment its not on the cards since I'm working on other fics. Maybe one day .
Thanks for reading and the awesome feedback.
<3

Reply


kes1807 November 28 2007, 13:35:03 UTC
Aww just so sad this line "Jared wanted to beg for Jensen’s forgiveness, wanted to burn his knees and plead but there wasn’t a point when he couldn’t even look himself in the mirror." poor broken boys!

I hate it when they are broken, but you write it so well.

Reply

c_ntbucket November 28 2007, 21:21:49 UTC
Thats probably my favourite line, it really shows how Jared is hurting and doiesnt know how to stop it.
Thanks for the wonderful comment.
<3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up