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c_callosum

Side Effects [One Piece fic]

Dec 04, 2011 01:08

Title: Side Effects
Words: 3981
Rating: T for some swearing and violence.
Characters: Sanji, Zoro, Robin
Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece.
Warnings: Spoilers for the Fishman Island arc. There are some discontinuities between what happened during the arc and what's written here. Slight OOC? I'm still trying to get a handle on their new ( Read more... )

sanji, fanfic, zoro, robin, one piece

Comments 15

sybile December 4 2011, 07:11:18 UTC

I facepalmed a little at the breast enhancement recipe. Oh Sanji, what are we gonna do with you...

But, cooking!Sanji. So happy to see him again! Been waiting to see him cooking in the manga since the timeskip happened. And I so love your explanation of the Attack Cuisine, I hope it'll be something like that in the end~
Zoro being suspicious of it at first because he stopped hurting was perfect too, pure Zoro-logic right there.

Thanks for sharing this fic!

c_callosum December 4 2011, 23:03:35 UTC

Sybbbbbbbb! Thanks for the comment, I can't wait to see cooking!Sanji too. And hopefully a not-so-fail!Sanji, which I tried to do at least in the last part of this fic :-P

bluewalk December 4 2011, 07:14:59 UTC

How to put into words exactly how... happy this fic made me. It was at turn hilarious, super cool and painful (so painful, oh poor Sanji XD). Zoro's logic behind pain being a good sign was a really nice touch, and his initial reaction to the Attack cuisine made me uneasy, but that's a good thing, because it made me anxious to hear Sanji's defense, which was also brilliant :D Forging Zoro's body... hehe.

And Robin! She's so not amused. Be careful, bro!

Oh, and this line:
It's a nice change to be in the company of a man who wouldn't know his inner maiden if she came up and punched him in the face.

Perfect. My night, it has been made. &hearts

c_callosum December 4 2011, 23:04:37 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. (Yeah, poor Sanji, I was a bit sad about making him fail when he really needs a success; hopefully the end made it better for him.)

Ooh, I'm glad you liked that line, it's probably my favourite in the fic too.

&hearts back at you :-D

velkynkarma December 4 2011, 17:15:24 UTC

This is lovely, I had a grand old time reading it. It's always a good sign when a fic can make you chuckle in amusement, grin at the familiarity, and seriously contemplate the content all in one :D

I had to laugh at Sanji's breast enhancement recipe pffft XD Especially since the girls already developed significantly since the timeskip started >_>;

Buuuut I do love the idea of Sanji having to specifically tailor meals to each and every person now for maximum effectiveness, it's a great idea :D

And this reminds me that I really need to catch up in the manga again....>>;

~VelkynKarma

c_callosum December 4 2011, 23:07:44 UTC

Thanks Karma! Really glad you liked it!

Oh, you're not caught up? I hope I didn't spoil anything major...I probably didn't, looking back, since I neglected some recent developments. The current arc looks like it's coming to an end, which I am personally rather thankful for to be honest!

velkynkarma December 5 2011, 17:01:02 UTC

Naw, you didn't spoil anything. Even if you did, I still wouldn't mind...I really need motivation to catch up >_>; The whole Otohime flashback thing kinda killed it for me and I stopped reading around then. Since then I've been using the anime to start catching up, but I really just need to work up the motivation to reread the fishman island stuff to remember wtf was going on...and then catch up, of course. Lol.

~VElkynKarma

astrokender December 6 2011, 20:42:40 UTC

I heart this sooo much. May I friend you to keep better track of your work?

c_callosum December 7 2011, 05:16:54 UTC

Glad you liked it! And of course you may (and I hope I may reciprocate!)

Hooray for new nakama! :-D

astrokender December 8 2011, 23:04:18 UTC

Of course!

paolka06 December 8 2011, 10:52:06 UTC

c_callosum December 9 2011, 03:33:15 UTC

Thanks Ringo for the kind words! :-D

I hope their changes don't necessarily mean that their dynamics change though...although I suppose it might a little...like Zoro considering Usopp to be a strong warrior he can easily trust his life to. Things like that I can live with. I hope that other substantial parts of their relationships don't change though.

I totally agree about Robin! Her sketching came as something of a surprise...maybe someone should write a fic speculating on why she's started doing that too :-P