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Balance of Power: Eden Gate--Chapter Three

Jul 15, 2009 22:05

Balance of Power: Eden Gate--Chapter Three

"Why, Sometimes I've Believed As Many as Six Impossible Things Before Breakfast."
( I think this calls for another round of beers )

roy, maes, fma, edward, fullmetal alchemist, mustang, elric, kain fuery, "balance of power", heymans breda, sheska, vato falman, tringham, hughes, "eden gate", alphonse

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reticent_lass July 16 2009, 05:01:08 UTC

This is fucking amazing to see but your cut is broken.

mfelizandy July 16 2009, 14:11:52 UTC

That would be because I forgot to put the cut in! This is why Lorrie generally does the posting...

Glad you liked the chapter, though!

eranith July 17 2009, 15:15:24 UTC

Mapping sewers? Ouch, in all appearances that's a demotion and a half. Although, Grumman's a schemer of sorts - I wonder why he put Falman down there?

That tunnel sounds quite like the sort of thing I'd expect to be produced by manga!Sloth, but this is anime-based. Either a nice melding of the two here, or something else completely mystifying. -- And it disappears o_o Now that's definitely mystifying! Hmmm.

*snickersnickersnicker* Gotta love the top-secret codenames.

Yay! And so the military dogs find out about this business too, excellent. I love those guys and it's not fair to leave them completely out of the action.

Military dogs in the sewer! mfelizandy July 17 2009, 16:10:34 UTC

There is a reason for Grumman's activities, the peekaboo tunnel, Sheska's appearance, and the Tringhams' finds. (Also, I love cameos.) Unfortunately, I can't really explain much of it without giving a lot of spoilers. Glad you noticed the similarity to Sloth's tunnel and liked the not-so-secret codenames!

Re: Military dogs in the sewer! eranith July 18 2009, 00:45:07 UTC

Ah, spoilers, the bane of my fandom-existance :P

ladyamber July 17 2009, 21:17:03 UTC

Ummm... this should probably be posted on the c_b_s community as well... just sayin'. ;)

mfelizandy July 17 2009, 21:51:08 UTC

I knew I didn't have it in all the right places. We have GOT to get fractured_chaos back online.

rosalui July 18 2009, 07:57:55 UTC

I'm so happy to see an update. :D Tho it's a bit shorter than normal, no? *is shot*

mfelizandy July 20 2009, 02:37:52 UTC

It is a little short. But then, so is Ed, even though he's grown a bit since the canon events.

Worry not, the way Chapter Four's going at the moment, it'll make up for any shortfalls in word count for Chapter Three!

orion117 July 18 2009, 08:10:40 UTC

It will be interesting to see how all these plot threads tie together! The last scene was my favorite, though. I'm glad we got to see Ed, Al, and Maes's arrival from the vantage point of the rest of Mustang's staff.