Interactive Prosfic Part Four

[byslantedlight]

Another wee bit to be carrying on with - and if someone would like to prompt the next scene...? *g*

Comments

[milomaus]

Pretty amazing that they let an outsider make the bomb.
Though we don't know yet, if there isn't anybody else in the group who introduced Doyle as somebody else, somebody trustworthy...

I wish Doyle would meet Moynihans grandmother. And get on her right side. ( Maybe because he sent Pelly away???)
And when the bust is done and everything wrapped up, Bodie could pick Doyle up and meet the Gran again, and she'd be all
"I remember you, you lout!" and asking Doyle what he does in the company of people like "him"...*gg*

[byslantedlight]

I suppose it depends how many bomb-makers most villains have in their circle of acquaintances! Everyone's an outsider at some point, but there are ways of choosing which outsiders to work with and which not to trust... And it sounds like Moynihan's keeping pretty close tabs on our Doyle... *g*

Heeeee - you're not allowed to try and write the whole fic for me! You obviously haven't met Moynihan's grandmother, either... *g* Was it all just a wish though, or was it a prompt? I'll give you a bit of it, if you like - Doyle meeting Moynihan's grandmother! *g*

[milomaus]

It was just some rambling...*ggg*

Use it as a prompt if you like, doesn't look like anybody else is around, and I would really like Doyle meeting the Gran! *vbg*
She'd be - ah, no wait, maybe I should write my own version of the story, ....*gg*

[byslantedlight]

No one else jumped in, so I shall use it as my next prompt - thanks!

And heeee - yes you should! *vbg*

[ali15son]

this is really enjoyable ...thankyou so much x

[byslantedlight]

I'm pleased you think so - thanks! *g*

[gvenanne]

This paragraph starting with He didn’t have time to sit there,.. and ending ...to stay far away from today’s fun and games. is in fact enough for me. Such beautiful depiction of Doyle really... I wouldn't need anything more, not even a sex-scene, before or after. I hope it is not too much of a seditious tought to say *g* I would love this bit alone as it is because of how Doyle is in it totally himself, in words, thoughts, gestures, feelings. Perfect. I could read and reread it forever)

[byslantedlight]

What a lovely comment to read - thank you so very much! I was just thinking of Doyle with Tin Can, and his boy's club, and how's he's always off having a kick-around with the local kids, and... I just think that's Doyle. Although he must have picked up the hair-ruffling from Bodie... *vbg*

[dollidaydream]

"Make the fucking cake."

I really like the way he calls it that. It makes it real. I'm really enjoying this. It feels like it could turn into a really long story!