[lotrips] two to tango 2/2

[byblythe]

co-written with shaenie, this part with cameo by sparcck
characters from lotr_porn

Comments

[dizzydame]

Jesus, that was good.

[blythely]

Thank you very much. That's a great icon, btw.

[pir8fancier]

Why is an interrupted sex with two writing that a zillion times hotter than 99% of the completed sex scenes I've read. Oh. Yeah, the writing.

Clapping madly because this world is all about sex and power and nobody does it better.

[blythely]

Heeeee. Am coming to agree that the tease is actually extraordinarily hot, although it does alarm many people who are looking for their, um, finish.

Thank you babe.

[cathgon54]

Oh God! I. Miss. This. So. Much. Thank you so much for the sizzling gift. *loves*

...Bill in his hands, his head tipped back, eyes half-closed and gorgeous, so fucking sharp and gorgeous.

Just so you know, this line nearly made me whimper.

[blythely]

You're most welcome, thank you for your feedback!

[msilverstar]

Completely and utterly fantastic. I love the way you two keep it slow, examine unexpected bits, let the characters go sideways instead of straight on till morning. Billy learning to dance is an image that stays with me, and his worries about Orlando and Dom both, and and and... It's all beyond good, it's engrossing and sexy and heartbreaking all at the same time. And the end! Smuttus interruptus, and worse, because it's more than sex. But then, one remembers that completely incendiary Ian/Dom scene and omg, what to wish for? More, is what. When it's ready. Because it's worth waiting a really long time for.

[blythely]

Ahahaha, that interruption was really kinda evil. Thank you, Avi. It's lovely to have detailed feedback and I'm soso pleased you enjoyed it. ♥

old friends

[anonymous]

Oh my GOSH I miss these guys. Thanks for digging this up.

--luiz.

Re: old friends

[blythely]

You're welcome, thank you for reading!