"Instant gratification is for Gryffindors and certain boys of her acquaintance" Love this line. Afterall, come on! Where is the sincere critique of the weaknesses of Gryffindor? Thank you. I loved the house stuff in this piece. Also, I love how you have Draco call her Parks. I saw that in another of your stories and while it probably isn't original to you, (is it?) I've always ever seen him call her Pans. Most Gryffindors call each other by the first name and people from other houses by their last--to me it is a kind of a separation/distrust technique, and it works well that Slytherins would affectionately distance themselves from each other this way. Because do Slytherins actually trust each other just because they're in the same house?? Come on. Lastly, I really dislike femslash, despite my own lovely IRL experiences with it, and so I tried not to read this one, but wow am glad I decided to click here.
I never understand why people don't like hot girl on girl action. I'm pleased it worked for you in that case! I think the Parks thing is from my RPG Draco a million years ago, but it is highly likely I didn't invent it!
I DO like hot girl on girl action, but I guess I've had a hard time finding it well-written and believable with HP characters. I just don't see Hermione or Ginny as particularly suited. So I kinda swore it off after being disappointed. You did not disappoint. Pansy/Cho were a perfect choice.
this is the only pansy and cho -- as individual characters (and as a pairing, too, but as individual characters, you just give them ... what they need to be present without taking away their core personalities -- other authors just make them boring 8) ) that i genuinely, genuinely like. AND THE STORY. It's clever and snappy and hot and oh, my, your talent is limitless.
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Love this line. Afterall, come on! Where is the sincere critique of the weaknesses of Gryffindor? Thank you. I loved the house stuff in this piece. Also, I love how you have Draco call her Parks. I saw that in another of your stories and while it probably isn't original to you, (is it?) I've always ever seen him call her Pans. Most Gryffindors call each other by the first name and people from other houses by their last--to me it is a kind of a separation/distrust technique, and it works well that Slytherins would affectionately distance themselves from each other this way. Because do Slytherins actually trust each other just because they're in the same house?? Come on. Lastly, I really dislike femslash, despite my own lovely IRL experiences with it, and so I tried not to read this one, but wow am glad I decided to click here.
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I DO like hot girl on girl action, but I guess I've had a hard time finding it well-written and believable with HP characters. I just don't see Hermione or Ginny as particularly suited. So I kinda swore it off after being disappointed. You did not disappoint. Pansy/Cho were a perfect choice.
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RPG is here: http://community.livejournal.com/dies_iteratur/profile. Never really got off the ground but there were some fun storylines nonetheless :)
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