Drabble - That Thing You Say

[byaghro]

Title: That Thing You Say
Author: byaghro
Word Count: 1356
Pairing: H/D
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mild language
Prompts: A blizzard, a Freudian slip, and rutabagas - Also a silver container but it got lost somehow. Maybe they dropped it in the snow.
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble was written for fun, not for profit

Comments

[dysonrules]

Remind me to demand ficcage more often. This was FABULOUS!!!! I already squeed a billionty on the "beta" so you know how much loveage I have for this. And how much I demand the sequel. I already have prompts for the next one. Ready?

And extra bonus kisses if you have Draco slip and mention winning the war again. *dies laughing*

(I'm not in bed either. And it's 11pm for me. *gasp*)

[byaghro]

*SQUISHES* I swear, without you NONE of my stuff would get posted! I'd write it & then hide it all under rocks! LOL!

YAY for sequels! Maybe I can work the silver container into THAT.

Yes, I am ready for the next round of prompts. NO, I don't want you to give them to me -- at least until I am through beta-ing your stuff with deadlines!! EEP! Otherwise I'll spend all of my time writing! Not that that's a BAD thing, but it is when my seme is counting on me & has deadlines! *grin*

SMOOCH!

[dysonrules]

LOL! Well, there IS another one out there that needs posting, you know! And yeah, next time remind me not to send you prompts two days before my fic is due!!!!! ACK. I still have to make the changes you send me!

[lijahlover]

Finally! After weeks of dancing around one another, they were going to do something about this, this thing that had been growing between them.

I loved this line and I agree they need to do something about this thing that's growing between them *g*

Fantastic!

[byaghro]

*dies laughing* You know, for all of my carefully planned phrasing... that was completely accidental! HA!! "Growing between them" - *snort* - my brain is pornier than I give it credit for! LOL!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

[magical_jen]

That was just lovely. I like how you mixed their snarkiness in with the romance. As I read this drabble, I couldn't help but picture the hundreds of possible conversations and feelings between Draco and Harry, which lead up to that moment. I really like how you wrote this drabble.

"Did it ever occur to you," Harry asked softly, "that maybe I wanted our first kiss to be someplace a little more special than the middle of nowhere in the freezing cold?"

"Hufflepuff," he muttered without much rancor, relaxing back into Harry's embrace.

I loved this part, it was so sweet. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[byaghro]

WOO! Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! How awesome that you were able to see all of the various moments they shared to get them to this point! I'm so pleased!! ^_^ Thank you again!

FLAME!...doused flame, but still a flame!

[lilith1631]

WHERE'S THE KISS?!?!?!?! WOE!!!!

Damn you, woman! This is cruelty! I demand a lawyer, someone who can make you write a sequel under court order! Goddamn, everything was there to make them kiss. Snow, middle of nowheres, and most of all, rutabaga! All the ingredients needed, and somehow, stoopid' Potter had to get all sappy and deny us horny readers a good bit of kissage.

*Dies from UST*
*Sulks.*

Pfft! I expect something of the same brilliance but with kissage next time, understand me?

>.< Lilith

Re: FLAME!...doused flame, but still a flame!

[byaghro]

Joe-baby gave me the prompts & said, "I want you to write me a drabble series." I can't let them kiss in the first part of a fluffy bunny OMG the cavities series! LOL!

Actually I don't know if this will be a series or not but we'll see.

Have your attorney call my attorney. I work for attorneys, I have lots of 'em. *g*

The next thing I plan to post should satisfy my horny readers... maybe. Heh.

XD

[dream4fatgirl]

*spazzing* that's cute! too cute for words!

[byaghro]

YAY!!! Thank you!! ^_^