Comments | bwinter: FIC: The First (Star Wars, PG)

bwinter

FIC: The First (Star Wars, PG)

Feb 18, 2006 23:11

For shoiryu's birthday, and for once within my deadlines ;) 333 words on Anakin and a white dragon.

( The First )

fanfiction, star wars

Comments 22

fyrie February 18 2006, 14:29:20 UTC

Oh wow. Oh, that is just so pretty. And gives Anakin some depth, as opposed to erratic bouts of "yippee!".

bwinter February 18 2006, 14:46:58 UTC

:D

I love kiddie!Anakin, really. He's much more than the 'yippeee' bits. I need to write more of him, I think ;)

fyrie February 18 2006, 14:49:42 UTC

Ooh, do write more! I would be horribly disappointed if you didn't. You take what Lucas managed to do weakly and make it such a lovely, shiny thing :D

As for me, I'm a big fan of kiddie!Luke :) And middle-aged!exile!hermit!Obi-Wan :D

(And I really need more star wars icons)

bwinter February 18 2006, 14:56:06 UTC

Tangent to yesterday's discussion, Lucas is another creator with much better ideas than execution, I'm afraid :)

Kiddie!Jinn is occupying me lately, as soon as I get assorted Coldfire people out of the way. Am tempted to just give everyone heart attacks and be done with it...

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shoiryu February 18 2006, 21:17:57 UTC

....EEEEEEEE. OMG this is wonderful. THANK YOU!

murasaki99 February 19 2006, 00:01:03 UTC

Cool icon! Is she of your drawing? She's very neat.

bwinter February 19 2006, 00:43:46 UTC

Glad to oblige :)

murasaki99 February 18 2006, 23:59:58 UTC

Ooo-hooo! That goes with my Anakin-rides-a-unicorn story!! I love it! It makes perfect sense a white dragon would only walk about at night, especially on a world with two suns.

Is the lady dragon naturally telepathic, or is Anakin broadcasting without thinking? I could see the dragon being naturally Force-sensitive.

Tell the mental image of Anakin of Pern to go away. Hee-hee! :D He has a name that doesn't hyphenate well - An'kin?

bwinter February 19 2006, 00:42:33 UTC

LOL, I don't think Anakin would fit too well on Pern ;) And in this one, he's broadcasting without thinking after being knocked on the head. I don't blame the dragon for being confused, really...

murasaki99 February 19 2006, 00:55:01 UTC

Anakin would fit well on Pern in that he'd make the world's most reckless dragonrider ever. A bronze dragon of course... and he'd attract the most bold hatchling of the group. Anakin would be the first person to 'port his dragon off-plant to other worlds. :D

I have a sequel to the unicorn story stuck in my brain - Tanoki is not a creature to simply give up on someone because they claim to be a Sith Lord. Kerynn would like Qui-Gon Jinn in that they much prefer the balance of the Force and not plunging off into total light or dark.