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[buzzylittleb]

What I've written is not where it belongs.

That and I might drop the coya element for now and concentrate on writing a different-but-the-same detective story [?]

I'm stuck between slightly flippant tone or a full-out omniscient author.

The latter lets me puff up the dramatic psycho-something styleThe former I might have slightly more wiggle-

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[ride_4ever]

*cheers on your dS fic whichever approach you follow*

[buzzylittleb]

See above!

Getting free of all the early [unhelpful] stuff makes this thing bounce.

[plus key opening chunk gives a reason that if I want a COYA it will have a great set-up for why Fraser is free to make a lot more decisions]

[buzzylittleb]

I've also come up with an explanation how the ducks got their nickname