Comments | buzzylittleb: I might actually write something

buzzylittleb

I might actually write something - woah!

Feb 11, 2010 20:25

I might just have figured out what was wrong with "Armando is a nice catholic boy" in the first place. It seems simple now, wrong squeeze. Nifty though Ray K is, it just didn't work even given the FBI's inky fingers. Billy Tallent, however, would hang out at a sex party somewhere in the Arizona desert. And... everything else would come ( Read more... )

writing angst, fanfiction, things that scare me about everything, armando

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kimboosan February 11 2010, 20:52:11 UTC

The only problem is can I dare open up a thing I haven't worked on for two years, even if I hope it is as incredible as I left it?

*gasps* YES! Oh, yes yes yes! Dare! I will catch you! I will lick all your words!

*frantic hand waving* All is well! All is good! Write, buzzy, write!

buzzylittleb February 11 2010, 22:01:18 UTC

Writing to Scissor Sisters on repeat now. Uh, it's inspired by "I Can't Decide" (the Master's song and dance routine in the future that didn't happen).

Just written:
He opened the gift-shop carrier and the silk shirt, sibilant in the darkness, felt so good against his skin. Boxers were surplus to requirements, he teased on jeans distressed to perfection that clung to his bare ass. A sandwich box concealed a Dillinger nestled in an ankle holster. The Bookman would never do anything as gauche, but Armando had a well-developed sense of self preservation. The nuns always said Armand learnt his lessons well.

Lickable?

kimboosan February 11 2010, 22:45:35 UTC

Yes, I think it is.

I don't care where you drop me in a story, I love reading how you show the characters as they move, progress, and think. The last part of this is the best, overflowing with little bits of character insight spilling out everywhere.

You know you make me happy, right? Because you do. ♥

buzzylittleb February 11 2010, 22:56:10 UTC

It's worth missing sunburnt chavs with drink-related injuries try and follow the red line to x-ray. Silly girl.

You're right on it - it's a character piece.

I'm doing the rewrites I had planned just before I started Poet. Seriously, I can't remember half my degree, but I can remember doing some notes about where to start changing the choreography etc

I had put it down to concentrate on the dsss entry. I just didn't know that it would expand like said sunburnt chavs' waistlines. Result: Poet

p.s. cleaning bath, what do you use?

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