Fic: Vizzini's Rule (44/105)

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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 44

Rating: R

Warnings: Bad words is all really

Spoilers: Season One thru Random Shoes (1x9)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around!

Summary: In which Ianto and Brendan head for the pub...

Notes: I made it to Philly!! Yay vacay!! *grins* AND

Comments

[_miss_daisy_]

Oh I liked this chapter a lot! Drunk!Ianto is fun, and I really liked the kiss. I'm kind of glad Ianto can't go through with the whole thing even though Jack said he could (which was an open mouth insert foot moment on his part I think). But I still like Brendan. I'm looking forward to more!

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Oh yes, Jack was WAY outta line there. But yeah, I couldn't make Ianto a cheater, just didn't seem right. So glad you liked my drunken boyz! :)

[thrace_adams]

Love Ratatouille :)

Love this chapter. Drunk boys are so cute. The kiss was hot! Brendan is hot...damn Jack! Glad Ianto didn't do anything stupid though...that would have totally sucked. Awesome chapter!

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Thanks hun! Hee!! I just realized that this is my first comment to you now that I know ya for real!! Squee! Had SO much fun this weekend. :D

OK, fic - so glad you enjoyed and yeah, just couldn't have Ianto cheat. It's just not him. :( Maybe have to bring Brendan back someday... ;)

[thrace_adams]

I know isn't that cool...now I have a face to think about when I write (um that didn't sound weird did it LOL) oh...reminds me to send you that mp3...*runs off to try to do that now*

[dragynville]

I wonder if Jack saw them kiss on the CCTV, hm.. and if he did, will it be a (necessary) slap upside the head? You've got me all intrigued. :D As usual.

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Yay - intrigued reader! Makes me happy. :D Hope you like Jack's reaction.

[butterflycell]

I can't help bu think that my poor Jack is going to be really upset over that, especially as he was jsut trying to do what was best by Ianto - I've been in the same situation as he was in, thinking you're doing the best for the other person, even if it's just saying it...

Awwwwwww! My poor baby! I really hope this doesn't get too badly between them... =[

Great chapter though!!

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Poor Jack indeed!! Nothing quite like getting hoist by your own petard. Hope you like the resolution!

[missthingsplace]

All caught up at last ... all of it wonderful. I love drink!Ianto ... probably best he refrained from doing anything with Brandon, I don't think Jack would be happy even if he did act like he wasn't bothered ...

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I agree, Ianto is just not a cheater, even if he has permission. *sigh* Now they're ALL unhappy. :( Have to fix that soon! Glad you're still reading and enjoying!