Three drabbles for Daesung's What's Up

Feb 09, 2012 17:02


3 What's Up Drabbles

1- Dosung/Jaehyun )

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shinchul303 February 10 2012, 02:48:55 UTC
I have SO SO SO missed your writing!

Within the genre, this is ethereal poetry.

Thank you for this.

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shinchul303 February 10 2012, 02:59:28 UTC
Upon a third reading, forget the genre.

This is ethereal poetry.

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butterflyweb February 10 2012, 19:08:20 UTC
That is so sweet of you to say, thank you!

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oldwillow_brook February 12 2012, 01:51:51 UTC
I AM IN SUCH AWE. I don't even know what to do with myself.

That first drabble, okay Jaehyun and Do Sung are the best couple ever. Just, so many emotions towards it. And I thought they were going to be the most perfect and then you wrote Dosung and Byunghun. Oh My God. I JUST CAN'T. THEY ARE SO AMAZING TOO. I don't know who I love more.

when he spends nights measuring the distance between their beds in meters, centimeters, millimeters. In liters of courage and lightyears of cowardice

There are honestly no words to describe what this sentence made me feel. Just how beautiful this was written. Dosung's desire is strong and his determination to not go near it is stronger. But he still is so compelled by his wants and Jaehyun's light that its just so overwhelming. And UGH I WISH THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE.

It's insane how your characterization is so on point. I am always floored by your writing and even more so now, after 20 episodes how you capture every distinct personality trait in each character.

Dosung smells like leather and ( ... )

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butterflyweb February 14 2012, 10:00:17 UTC
Late late reply but--

Thanks so much! I'm all grinning and happy that you enjoyed them--I wish that there would be more fic about the dramas the boys are in--19, Into the Fire, Iris, What's Up, etc--since the beginning half or more of my days of fan fic were in FPF, but I digress.

I'm so happy you liked the Jaehyun/Dosung, I love how fail and shy Dosung is around him, and how when he was going to quit Jaehyun was all on his ass. Not to mention the only time we heard Dosung even raise his voice was in defense of Jaehyun.

And then I just thought to myself oh. Byunggun. Dosung. YES. :DDDD Glad you agreed!

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