FFVII- Requiem Of Love- Chapter 1: Traditional Mourning

[butterflys_fics]

Title: Requiem Of Love- Chapter 1: Traditional Mourning
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1430
Characters Included: Godo, Toki, Yasou, Mio, Kiara Takarai, Naoko Takarai, Kuniko, mentions of Godo's parents
Warnings: None
Author's Notes: Takes place in the world of ffvii_tng. All accept Godo are OC's.
Summary: Godo sees someone who strikes his interest.

Comments

[pariswriter82]

Awww.... love at first sight. I wonder how Kiara's going to react to the prince of Wutai having the hots for her, lol...

And I think you messed up Godo's age. It's been eight years since his brother died, and you said he was fifteen when that happened, so he would already be 23 (which was how old we figured he'd be when Tseng is born). Perhaps change the fifteen to thirteen? Then he'd be 21 right now to Kiara's 18 - which is the same three-year difference we figured on.

[butterflys_fics]

I wanted him a bit older than her than originally intended, simply because it works better with the story in my head (darn brain), but she will still be about 20 when Tseng is born, he will just be a little older than before.

[pariswriter82]

Damn... that'll make him 40 when Yuffie is born, lol.

[butterflys_fics]

lol, that works

Tseng is gonna be pretty old when he is a dad, isn't he?