Distraction

[butterflybird46]

Title: Distraction
Author: Ngan
Rating: NC17
Characters: Junsu and Yoochun
Disclaimer: Don't own the characters; own the plot
A/N: this is the side story to Angst. (Check my page for that JaeMin story.)

Junsu wandered aimlessly around the house, walking wherever his feet took him.

He didn't have anything else to do now that Yunho took away his pride and

Comments

[butterflybird46]

sorry...i have credited you!

[sum3r]

LOL sooooo good, but so funny as well..
"Who could that be? I didn't know we had a kid in the apartment today..." i laughed out loud in this one XD
and Junsu's "oh, what's this"? = priceless
XD XD i luv it ♥ ♥ ♥
(of course the "implied" fact that they had smex helped too ^O^)
awesome job~!

[butterflybird46]

thanks...i didn't feel like writing about the smex so i just let it be powered by your imagination! oh i love how Junsu is so innocent sometimes...good thing Micky's there to teach right?

[enchanted1312]

oh my, now i know what the hell had happened. it's a good thing that you had pointed this thing out for me because it's been a long long time since i click on a fiction link. haha, too lazy i guessed. but woa, a vibrator? now that's naughty. *giggles* just one suggestion though it's about the name, it's better if you go with Yoochun when you used Junsu or Xiah when you are using Micky because then there wouldn' be any clash and it would sound better i think that way. ^^ love it!

[butterflybird46]

did i do that? okay going to go change that just for you but i'm glad you enjoyed!

yeah the vibrator...didn't know where the hell that came from but it worked didn't it?

[enchanted1312]

nah, i just want to tell you abt it so that u could recognize the mistake. i find out that getting the name rights are important in a fiction. ^^