Affirmation Chapter Sixteen

[butterfly_fics]

Title: Affirmation (Chapter Sixteen)
Author: Vanessa
Pairing: OB/VM
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When a tragic situation leaves Orlando broken and isolated will Viggo’s love and belief in him be strong enough to bring him back?
Feedback: Always appreciated
Warnings: Violence, Angst, and Character Death (Original Characters only).
Disclaimer: This is not

Comments

[arcadii]

How dare Viggo be such an ass! He new Orlando had problems (who wouldn't)and to get angry and take away the only safe thing in his world, just because a roll in the hay didn't work out the way he wanted is monstrous!!! He'd really feel like shit if Orli retreated back into his dream world. Please let him be ok and post soon. Thank you for a rousing chapter; getting so angry with Viggo really woke me up and got me goin!

[butterfly_fics]

It's as much Orlando's fault as Viggo's. Viggo isn't mad at Orlando because a roll in the hay didn't work out... he's mad because Orlando knew that it wouldn't work and persisted anyway. He's mad because that wasn't the first time that happened and Orlando kept insisting on pushing even though he knew he wasn't ready. He's mad at himself because he doesn't manage to stop it.

Viggo is fine with waiting as long as Orlando needs for sex. He's not fine with Orlando pushing forward without thinking and hurting both of them in the process... again and again and again. I thought that was clear in the last chapter... *bites lip*

Viggo feels like shit anyway. He hates being upset with Orlando, no matter how justified he feels it is.

As for Orlando being okay... you'll have to wait until next week to find out. *evil grin*

Thanks for the feedback.

[sitaray]

I must know what is on that note!!!! And what happened to Orli to make Vig so frantic! You're killing us with the suspense!

[butterfly_fics]

I could tell you, but then I can't let you read the last four chapters. You choose. *smirks*

As for what happened to Orlando, you'll find out next week. Maybe.

Do try not to die from the suspense, though.

Thanks.

[jackieville]

AHHHHH!!!!!! I need more!!! *sobs*

Damn Viggo!!!! *growls*

*squishes my poor Orli*

[butterfly_fics]

Next week! I promise!

*giggles* Why is everyone mad at Viggo NOW? *laughs* I thought you'd be mad at him last chapter, not this one.

And careful there... he's still rather jumpy around strangers.

Re: Affirmation (Chapter Sixteen)

[butterfly_fics]

Yes, Orlando still has a lot of issues.

And yes, four more chapters. Well, technically three and an epilogue, but the epilogue is longer than most of the chapters already and it's not finished yet, so... *laughs* It actually might end up being four chapters and an epilogue... it's going to depend on how the editing goes on the last few, but as it's written it's four chapters and an epilogue... and it's all written except the last part of the epilogue.

[caseymochridh]

I'm afraid I'm one of those people who read and liked your original "Affirmation". I'm looking forward to seeing what you've changed and how you've change it. This is going to be fun and interesting - which sounds weird given the angst and pain of the storyline.

[butterfly_fics]

Why are you afraid you're one of the people who liked it? *laughs* I liked it too... when I wrote it. If I hadn't liked it, I wouldn't have re-written it.

I hope you enjoy the new version as much as or more than the old one.