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butterfly

Fic: Revision - Ordinary Girl

Oct 06, 2003 01:15

Not entirely sure where this came from. Dawn-fic. Post-Chosen. Minor geographical spoiler from Just Rewards (Angel, second episode of season five). Day in the life fic.
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gen, dawn, buffy the vampire slayer

Comments 9

lasultrix October 6 2003, 02:46:10 UTC

Nice ficlet. Great closing line.

butterfly October 6 2003, 02:47:35 UTC

Thank you. And that was actually the easiest line to write - that's it was going in my head the whole time.

butterfly October 6 2003, 02:49:21 UTC

that's where it was going in my head the whole time.

Can you tell that it's almost three in the morning for me?

lasultrix October 6 2003, 03:01:02 UTC

Hee. You should go to bed. Prototypes need sleep!

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Wonderful! honorh October 6 2003, 07:17:57 UTC

Typical day in the life of Dawn, who just can't manage typical. The last line is indeed perfect, and it sums up the entire fic.

Re: Wonderful! butterfly October 7 2003, 15:38:09 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it. I mean, I adore your posts over at ATPoBtVS.

inyron October 6 2003, 08:15:01 UTC

Good piece- I especially liked Dawn's list of possible opening lines.

butterfly October 7 2003, 15:39:53 UTC

Thank you. And I enjoyed writing that bit... tweaking it to make it as Dawn as possible.